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by desolatebutterfly

schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snicker*
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)

The wording is interesting. . . . I like the mild humor in it. . . . I really like the paragraph beginning with “The blond held his hands up in a pacifying gesture.” . . . I like the details about Sasuke’s hair. . . . And . . . that was it? Wow, that was quick. Not bad, though.
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw man! it ended so quick! still hot though. 8)
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I could see Sasuke squeaking if it came to it. I like a squeaking Sasuke. I also like a screaming Sasuke.
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...great one shot. That was really nice and I loved how both of them were very well-written within their characters. :) thanks
person Jackee
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drools*
Great little fic, I absolutey loved it!!! :D
person Kennaki
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Short- yet amazing.
I really like your stories, keep up the writing! <3
I'd love a part two on this. ^-^