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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Heh—Sasuke considers that he was sold. Ouch. I’m already curious about the exchange. ____ So Sasuke’s in denial that he wants Naruto. ____ I like that bit where Sasuke touches the whisker-marks. ____ So he feels like he’s making himself suffer as … punishment? He’s suffering for them? For failing them? ____ Ah yes. There it is. ____ Oho, interesting. Nobody else knows. ____ Just three days? I like that short time limit. ____ That was pretty sad.
Heh—Sasuke considers that he was sold. Ouch. I’m already curious about the exchange. ____ So Sasuke’s in denial that he wants Naruto. ____ I like that bit where Sasuke touches the whisker-marks. ____ So he feels like he’s making himself suffer as … punishment? He’s suffering for them? For failing them? ____ Ah yes. There it is. ____ Oho, interesting. Nobody else knows. ____ Just three days? I like that short time limit. ____ That was pretty sad.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eeek...dark and scary. Not bad by any means, just sad and dark and scary. It made me want to cry for them. :(
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am confused with this story. What did Naruto give up? And why is he in a semiform of the Fox? Did he blend with the Fox in order to get Sasuke back? There are a lot of loose ends and I hope you are planning on updating this fic.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....Wow. That's all I can say...
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice job ^^
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....i'm at loss for words...
...wow...
...wow...
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good! i enjoyed it a lot! Nice possessive Naruto!