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for Natural Talent

by CrazyToffee

schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, I had so much fun reading this fic, I love this kind of fics, so awkward but so IC :D
great job!
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious XD
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL
person conquerors star
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nyahh that's amazing! XD like others have said, perfectly in character ^_^. this story definitely did not get as many hits as it deserves
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Funny stuff, hehehe. I loved their fighting over every single little detail. Now this kind of relationship between them I can imagine much better than the fluffy fuzzy stuff you see a lot. I really enjoyed it! :)
person sadistickiss
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UWAA!! Kawaii, naa ^^. That was such an awesome piece. They were so in character I'm almost convinced it's cannon XD! You did an amazing job with keeping them in char. Oh please, share with us your secret ^^ - how did you do that? *giggles immaturely* They're so adorable. Greaaat fic, I absolutely loved it. I've never read a better SasUKE before, so: well done XP! Keep it up =3
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is actually refreshing to see a fic where its so much more realistic than most of what we see on AFF. It takes time for relationships to form and practice in bed with your partner to understand them, so kudos to you for giving us a more realistic version of how Sasuke/Naruto might turn out. :)
person Nana
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I mean, I have my fingers up his… up Sasuke’s… and that’s…

Not such a sexy thought, if he got clinical about it.

......*dies of laughter*
person Taylor
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can seriously imagine them both arguing like that in bed. Awesome job. *high five* XD
person ais
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man, i laughed out loud a few places.. especially the, "Don't experiment on me!" part, because i could see Naruto being all indignant at such a point, and Sasuke's retort is just great. very amusing.. definitely had me giggling/grinning/laughing through pretty much the whole thing. it's totally time Sasuke loses at something. oh also i liked the reptilian smile. thanks for writing/sharing!