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by terranigma11

person Nekohime (Un-logged in and lovin it)
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Blink Blink.. Tears fill the Neko's eyes, and stream down her face in waves, not unlike those creepy disturbing looks between Lee and Gai*


AHHH! I can't even tell you how severely happy I am to hear that you're not going to abandon this story!!! I can't even believe such a thought would enter your mind! *Brandishes a supersoaker watergun filled with acid and banishes the evil FanFic killing Demon that is 'lack of confidence.' That'll Teach you!! Mess with one of my favorite authors will ya! *Shakes fist* No .. but in all seriousness.. if reviewing is all it takes to keep you writing this wonderful story, then consider yourself in for some long sit ins.. Cause I can seriously leave some long reviews when motivated and your story is just that kind of story that I'll sit and write a novel of a review for.. Thank you for this great Chapter.. My God! hahah.. I can't wait to see in what way Saske's brain explode once he sees this journal entry.. Heh sometimes I findmyself browsing the featured videos on Youtube, in search of those entries.. (This is how much your fic has warped my brain thank you!)

Keep up the fantastic work.. I know I don't need to tell ya that.. But do it anyways ^_^!!

With much love and enraptures appreciation...

Neko
person chelzi
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is great. i really do love this... sasuke looking at the calvin klein model... hehe... i can't believe he tapped his phone!!

evermist: And /I/ can't believe it's not butter!

chelzi: that is SO rude, shika-kun!!! i suppose it's so no one tells him, but still... i wonder if gaara's seen the videos? probably, since everyone has, but... yeah, naruto is SOOOOOOOOO cute!! ^_^_^ YAY!!

evermist: Keep writing! =^.^= Shikamaru is so mean. But he rocks, he's mah favorite! *holds up sign reading: 'I Love You, Shika Please Bear My Children'* That was random. And not even true! I want /Kakashi/ to bear my children!

chelzi: uh... riiiiiight........................ anyway, she's crazy... i love shikamaru too, but he's being very very very very very very mean. please update soon!! i can't wait to see what happens!! ESPECIALLY THE DATE!!!! ^_^_^_& SQUEE!!~

evermist: DR. PEEEPPEEEEEEEERR!!!
person Carla
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont like reviwing but since you seem to need it to lower your bouts of depression here it is. I like the story, am confused but that doesnt mean that i would like to be left totally in the dark if you where to leave this as it is or unfinished. So, get a clue and keep up your excellent posting skills. The making of the journal's entries are so hilariously funnny that i cant decide if i like the actual facts-events happening or when Naruto gives us his account of the day to have it be post at youtube without his knowledge of course. So, yeah; thanks for your prompts updates and dont you dare throw in the towel if you get flamed or the story is not reviewed as much as it is being hit on. You have a loyal reader in me even if i dont reviw so please keep it up and will be waiting for the next chapter as am very interested in the Gaara/Naruto date as well as Sasuke's reaction to the date. So please hurry up with the next chapter, ok?

Carla
person Angel
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away tears of joy*

Honey I just want to tell you...I have never...and I mean NEVER laughed so hard. My friend gave me a link to your fiction and I couldn't drag myself away from the computer till I was done reading it. You've got one hell of a sense of humor. Don't lose it. It's brilliant and I am looking forward to more chappies <3
PS. I hope you'll feel better and won't get any diseases or what not >< Take care of yourself, you're needed, I can assure you.
person tariray
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uh.....
oh........ my......
yeah... that had to be one of the GREATEST fanfics i've read in eons.
I swoon in my puddles of laughter, i dribble in my giggles and am simply endeared (in super ass luff!) with yor story.
I normally dont like AUs but this one is just too much of a jem to let go.
congrats- you have a huuge fan here...
v^_^ peace!
person innerchild
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god, everytime i read a chapter, i have to stop drinking cause i might piss my pants. i love your style of writing. it always makes me laugh. and i like how you put relena in there.... that was random. but random hot chicks are always welcome.

anywho, great job. hope u update soon!

-inc
person KatDiva
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome not to mention hilarious!

Tooooo funny! Keep up the great work!
person chelzi
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohmygod!! this is so CUTE!! i'm so happy gaara and naru got together!! they're adorable! of course, sasuke's gonna go bananas now... dick. i can't wait to see what happens!! at first, i thought it would be sasunaru (eventually), and that's it. but then neji likes naru, and so does gaara!! ^_^ gaara wins!! for...now... sasuke will probably win in the end, but i do like gaara+naruto. they're cuties!! of course, naru+sasu+gaara... that's just hot. with neji in background... ahhhh... excuse for a moment, i need to go lock my bathroom door...
............
............okay, i'm back. sorry. i have a... VERY dirty mind. anyway, PLEASE update!!~
person Nekohime (Un-logged in and lovin it)
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The sweet adorableness and hilarity of this story completely and utterly blows my friggen mind!!!!!

Oh My God! I mean I've read some funny stories in my time.. written some too.. But.. I have never laughed so much while reading a fan fic.. EVER.. Your timing, how everything set up, the seamless and well placed way that you have different animes and genre's cross over.. is pure brilliance!!! It's not forced or anything.. You just slip'em right in there subtly, and if any of the characters aren't recognized.. it's cool cause you just make it work! GAH I love it.. I love this fic. .I've been reading it for the past few days and failed to review... Forgive me... I don't know why I didn't review.. But after reading this last chapter.. I realized I'd be a total ass not to leave one. And don't even let me get started on how wonderful the plot is.. and how the grammar and diction is spot on (Ish a grammar nazi of sorts.) Anyways.. I am done rambling nonsence!.. Really I am.. And I applaud your work on this wonderful story!


Neko's Rate:: 5 STARS Times ten million!

(Rating is good for you!!)
person sadistickiss
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOT!!! They're going on a date ~ ~ *daze*. For some reason, I can't stop smiling. *whispers* Maybe it's becaue Tsuande-baachan is crazy... Or maybe it's because Gaara is adorable and the SasuNaru going on is so beautiful I could hug something *stares at fridge*.

Umm.. yeah..

Anyway, you and your story kick ass! Update soon ^^