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by terranigma11

person LQ
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since starting this story an hour ago, I have laughed myself into a headache THREE times, startled my aunt twice when I went to get some water and was cackling, and laughed so hard i started coughing. THIS FIC IS BAD FOR MY HEALTH AND THE MENTAL WELL BEING OF MY FAMILY!!!!

That said, PLEASE write more. There is some grammatical errors that could use some fixing, but nothing serious. The characters are mostly OOC but who cares? This fic is brilliant in it's humor and the crossovers were killing me.

My favorite part though was Itachi's adivce to Sasuke on finding a serial killer in his room. I showed it to my friend and that was the first laugh induced headache I got. I'm STILL cracking up over it.
person galalalala <3
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GA! Wonderful wonderful wonderful! Great chapter, almost made me split a lip from smiling. Someone should really make a flash of Narutos journal entries. That would be awsome eh?!
person Carla
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this old story between Sasuke and Naruto sex related? Did Sasuke breached the limit and hit on Naruto?
person Alia den
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story! so many great conflicting emotions.
person sadistickiss
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is so stupidly adorable XP!!! Like really, does he have to talk about his trips to the toilet *in DETAIL* in his DIARY!? *blush* Argh! It's so embarassing XP!!! He's so cute... ah... I can't wait to hear more from Shuichi and Yuki ^^ *squeE!* It'll be nice to say hi to Gaara and Lee too - And whaddya mean you don't like them as a couple?! They're so cute together *_*

Update soon =3
person innerchild
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man, that was soooooo good. by eyes hurt from staring at the screen for so long, but this story is unbelivable. i'm hooked. i hope you're feeling better though, i know hospitals are no fun.

can't wait until you update!

-inc
person sadistickiss
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*throws flowers* You're hilarious XD!!! This is seriously one of those fics that I read through the cracks of my fingers. Argh the embarassment XP!!! Poor Naruto, awww.. Shika better have a damn good explanation for what he's doing (or else I'll SMACK HIM). Itachi sounds so cool ^^ *giggle*, ah and so does Sai XP! I can't believe he just shoved his hand down like that *snickers*. Anyway, update soon ^^.
person Sam
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really want more updates! I need to know what the big plan is. !!! UPDATE!!!!!
person chelzi
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! shu and eiri have a not-so-small-role!!! i soooooo wanted shino to beat the shit out of shikamaru!! grr... i was like 'beat him up! do it!' and then i said 'no, don't! i think i kinda know why he's doing it!' then i changed my mind again and said 'beat up anyway! just don't do too serious of injury!!!' ............yeah. please update soon!!! i really love this story! i can't WAIT for more!!!!~
person Darling_425
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gawd! I love this story! I'll wait for the next update.
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Too bad, English is not my mother language, so I don't understand what did Naruto do before the phone rung... (dump? What the hell?!