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by terranigma11

person innerchild
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
glad u'r out of the hospital and feeling a bit better. i'm so happy that you updated this story! it made my day... cause its started off pretty crappy with waking up all sick and whatnot. but its getting better now. please update soon, cause this story is one of my favorites.

-inc
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Such a quick update <3. Anyways, glad to hear your doing better! Keep up the great work! Im completly in love with this fic! GAH!
person Teki
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww! That's so sad!!! >< Poor Naruto... Poor Shino even more though!!! >< Please update fast!! ><
person Teh Rin-chan
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naru-chan needs hugs. *nodnod* And I'm seriously questioning Shikamaru's motives...as well as Ino's...but mainly Shikamaru. Is he doing it as a FAVOR to Naruto, or to ridicule Naruto? At first glance, it seems like he's trying to ridicule him. But if you look at it from a different point of view, it also seems like he's trying to get everybody to know Naruto better so that poor Naru-chan won't have as hard a life as he would have otherwise... Or maybe I'm just looking too much into Shika-kun's motives. Oh well. ^^ Can't wait for the next update!
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Shu and Yuki! You are teh awsome! Love the story by the way!
person Rin-chan ^^
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy 'ell. 0.0 If I wasn't sure my family would be seriously concerned for my mental and physical well-being, I'd give in to the urge and fall out of my chair and start rolling around on the floor laughing my head off. ^^ Can't wait for the next update!
person riddle-me-yellow
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! This fic is quickly becoming one of my favorites. I had to resist the urge to let out girly squeels about a couple hundred times while reading you fic. I love the misunderstod Hinata,its hillarious! Also, I hope you get better really soon. Being stuck in hospital is no fun :(. Keep up the wonderful writing!
person sai
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! gravitation, harry potter...hilarious! please continue
person OlinKuragi13
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great...I've fallen out of my chair twice!
person Mar
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loooooove it... the first chapter with word vomit was soooo cool, sooo totally naruto. but damnit whyyyy shika whyyy??? anyways, make it som e cruel rewason, much better than a "im sorry naruto i just thought that poeple would like you more if they knew you better" thing
update sooon
xmar