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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter so much!! I love SHino so much!! >< He's like the best eprson ever!! >< I'm angry that no ones telling Naruto about whats happening! I'm pissed at Shika! Even if it is his moms fault!! >< Please update soon!! ><
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You kidding me? I thought that whole 'B2K' virus thing was hilarious XD And oh, before I go on, I am in a bit of a hurry and I have yet to buy a new mouse b/c mine is broken, but I still want to leave you a quick comment ^^ this chapter was fine. I really liked the end too. The one where Shino is royally pissed at Shikamaru and how he overheard everything Shikamaru and Neji said. But it's so sad too. I can't believe that Shikamaru is betraying his friend. Friends don't do that. It seriously depresses me. Naruto trusts him so much and he's constantly dealing with people that hate him. He never stopped to think that maybe Shikamru too didn't like him. Makes me want to cry so bad T.T I hope Shino kicks Shikamaru's butt or something. B/c man, Shika is definetly asking for one ass kicking. And as for Sasuke, where the hell is that guy? I was expecting him to have already reached Naruto or something. But no~, he's probably having more photo shoots. Just what is he anyway? A model?
Alright, I have to end this over here because I'm getting too sleepy to continue. Sorry ^^; I hope you feel better. Btw, Why are you in the hospital? And if you still are and you had updated from there, how the heck did you get your hands on the computer? They have laptops there or something?
Update when you can, and again, I liked the chapter. You'll improve more as you continue writing. Trust me.
Ja ne
~Ria ¢¾
Alright, I have to end this over here because I'm getting too sleepy to continue. Sorry ^^; I hope you feel better. Btw, Why are you in the hospital? And if you still are and you had updated from there, how the heck did you get your hands on the computer? They have laptops there or something?
Update when you can, and again, I liked the chapter. You'll improve more as you continue writing. Trust me.
Ja ne
~Ria ¢¾
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
QUOTE: "Sasuke knew he was sexy, and he’d be damned if he didn’t act the part twenty-four seven."
DAMN RIGHT.
DAMN RIGHT.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding, not up to par??? It was awesome. I think it was even better written than the other ones, and it was still ridiculously funny. I'm really intrigued to see why Shika would go so far... for Ino?? What's he doing? Hmm guess I have to wait, and where the hell is Sasuke? But you handle multiple people so well. That bit with Sakura was amazingly hysterical! And it's kind of interesting to see Hinata not as like, well, a sort of sweet, nice-to-everyone kind of girl. I hope you get better soon though!
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapter is great! Amazing even! You doubt yourself too much! Get well soon and update!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG your story is so freakin hilarious. I love it
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*is dying because she just finished the most recent chapter already* I wanna read more ;___; Please update soon!!!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER AWSEOM CHAPTER!!! YAAAAAAAA I CAZINT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!! I WONDER WHAT WILL HEPPEN TO NARUTO? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! Poor Naruto... *cries* SAVE HIM, SHINO!!! SAAAAAAAAAAVE HIIIIIIM!!!
Pride: dear god, now she's going to be on the look out for Shino/Naruto porn or something....
me: ... OMG. You'RE BRILLIANT, PRIDE! *runs off in search of Shino/naru fics*
Pride: dear god, now she's going to be on the look out for Shino/Naruto porn or something....
me: ... OMG. You'RE BRILLIANT, PRIDE! *runs off in search of Shino/naru fics*
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
usually any use of the internet in fanfiction results in... well crap. HOWEVER your story is NOT crap. Just to make it clear. I am enjoying your story. I am entertained, and curious and hopeful and wish it was moving faster but know that stories have to build on their own. So I look forward to reading further into the story and hope to see more of it as soon as possible. Thank you for the wonderful story and idea. I am thoroughly enjoying it so far.
Kim
Kim