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by terranigma11

person chelzi
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww... shika's so mean! i hate him right now...
my favorite part was kiba and shino's fight. my sis and i read fics out loud now, it all started with manga downloads, but anyway... i was shino, and she was kiba, and it was great! i had already read half of the chapter at school, so i knew what was going to happen and-- yeah, it was funny. please update soon! and i hope you get better really fast!~
person avila7989
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW INO WANTED TO GIVE SHIKA A KISS!! I HOPE THEY GET TO KISS SOOON!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
person Rasengan22
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG I love you, ok, first, this is all funny as heck! But aww you mentioned Shuichi and Yuki! Squeee a million times over. Maybe Naruto and Shuichi should get together to talk about their ice-prick boyfriends? But anyway, oh this is super cute and hilarious! I hope you keep writing for it!
person otaku_myst
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is it me, or are Ino and Shika being the bad-guys here? i mean, they said "naruto will get what he deserved" and all. Arghs!! i'm so confused!! T_T wellz i hope everything clears up soon, updates!! i luv it ^_^
person sharingan.swirl
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!!! *busts a guts* Oh dear lord.... that has got to be one of the funniest things i've read in a while. On one hand, I feel so bad for Naruto... but on the other... It's just too perfect. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Until then!
sharingan.swirl
person conejo
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is sad... :(
person tismine
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Naruto :( He's so precious! Please update soon
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*sweatdrops at crappy review*
person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chapter and I definetly think that you should contiue. At first I thought that this was going to be a story like any other, but I was readily attached. I demand more chapters ^.~

Btw, was Shikamaru saying 'sorry' b/c he's purposely having Naruto's journal publicily viewed on Youtube?

Happy Writing

~Ria ^^





person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not to sound at all mean or aggressive, but if you do not update I will hunt you down and tie you to my bed post. ^^


Can't wait for the next chapter *jumps in excitement*


Now, how do I feel about this second chapter? I feel so bad for Naruto. That ahs to be the meanest thing that I've ever read that a 'friend' would do to another. Talk about cruel. But atleast no one was making fun of him. they gave him sweet comments and talked about doing naughty things to him. =^.^= would doing naughty be considered a cute thing? ^^' Yeah, ignore me :D

But seriously, that's really cold. Now I don't know what exactly happened btwn Naruto and Sasuke in the past, but I hope that Sasuke warns my baby blonde nonetheless. I'm starting to assume that Sasuke perhaps already has a slight thing for Naruto, am I right? I hope so :)) That'll be all too cute.

Now sorry that I have to cut this short, but my mouse is broken and theres this box that's covering a part of my screen, so I can't really see what I'm typing. So I'll leave here and bid you good night.

Ja


~Ria ^.~


Btw, did Sasuke go to school with Shikamaru? B/c it would be very easy to find out who this 'mystery'person that loaded the video on Youtube is.
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Graviatation and HArry Potter! You are awsome!!