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by terranigma11

person Carla
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a chapter! I love it and even happier knowing that you are about to post the next one! What did Gaara meant by his comment about that not having stoped his dad? His dad with him or his aunt? Also, who rescued Nejii from Sasuke?, maybe? Or was it Sasuke the one in the bushes as I remember that he is not wearing a animal custome this time? Great line that of Tsunade about homos! It had me busting! Anyway, update soon pls!

Carla
person Bookworm51485
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you have officially freaked me out. My OCD kicked in BIG TIME in that toilet scene and now I'm just completely and totally freaked out. Please for the sake of my sanity add in a scene where there's soap and Gaara's face involved because I think I'll cry otherwise. I swear, I wash my hands throughly anytime they have to come anywhere near my face area, so that just scares me. Actually now that I think about it, that's actually one of my OCD induced nightmares. Having my face anywhere near a toilet, I think I'd have to kill myself *Shudders*. Yes, I know I'm crazy. Sorry. Moving on...

I loved that parts with Gaara (up until the toilet head flushing part. Poor Gaara, his siblings really should have fixed him before he left the house. But I guess they were either too scared or in shock. I can actually picture it in my head and it's just not pretty. A guy would have to be pretty socially inept to think he should put on large amounts of make up for a date. I love it:) And I love the GaaNaru. It's so nice to see non-SasuNaru pairings. I just get happy everytime I see them. Not that I hate SasuNaru but there are just too many, waaaaaaaaay too many, and too little, waaaaaaay too little, of anything else.
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey terranigma11 =^-^=


Wow. I love your story. It’s getting better and better and you’re probably wonderful who the hell am I because I’ve been too inconsiderate to leave you a two line comment telling you how beautiful your story is so far. Gomen nasai. I’m just so busy nowadays. I find it hard to admire other writers, but you stand out just as much as Here’s to the Fox (A total must read *WIP*)
Anyways, I’m fasting like extra days here and I was trying to find something that’d pass time and here I found that you had updated your story. You are one helluva ‘n updater, ya know that? I don’t know how you do it. I still have yet to update my story ‘Distractions’. but I’ve got reason. I lost my latest chapter so I’m having to retype it over again. (No I do not have it written down somewhere. It’s all in my head)

Anyway, sorry I tend to get off topic at times. Will it be alright if this accounted for a comment for every chapter you’ve posted and I have left you a review for? I promise that I’ll leave you one for every new chapter from now. I know how much reviews make an author happy ^o^ Trust me, I’m in all smiles whenever I receive one.

Okay, now how about actually comment your latest chapter? I think that’ll be good. I love everything that you did for Naruto and Gaara so far. But I have to say, that whole flushing Gaara’s head threw me off so far I thought I seeing stars. And ummm, whatever Neji thinks is going on ……..yeah, man do I feel sorry for him. And uh, why the heck was Sasuke stalking him? Shouldn’t he be only concentrating on Naruto? :-/

Oh, I bet I know who was hiding in the bushes when they pulled Neji out of ‘harms way’. Was it Tenten? Or it could be Hinata? ……O.o or on second thought, what if it was Shikamaru? -.-’ on second thought, I’m not really so certain. But I think it’s one of those four. ^^’

The Kiss. That. Was. Awesome. Now I’m not all too big on NaruGaa, but more of those scenes could definitely change my ways of Yaoi =^-^=

…………I’m still cheering for some NaruSasu (If you couldn’t tell, I love it when it’s Naruto who’s seme ^.~

But oh, you can’t leave Neji out because it’s been like foreverish seen I’ve read anything pertaining to them two together. Maybe at the end you could have a NejiGaara couple? That’d be so kawaii ^^ But of course you’re the Author. I could only provide suggestions that’ll only be thrown out the window.

Alright *Examines length of comment*, I think this should be long enough of a review, ne? n_n
Btw, my comments don’t normally go on this high. Only when I really like you will you receive such messages ^=^ Well, that and because I haven’t commented your story the way it needs to be commented. Hehe =P


Later m’love
Happy Writing *w*




~Ria ^.~
person innerchild
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was hilarious. i can't believe that naruto flushed gaara... on their first date. that was brilliant. i love naruto and gaara together, so if they just mess around or actually become a couple, then i'll be happy. cause i love sasuke wit naruto just as much. it's hard to decide sometimes.

how about they both just screw naruto and then he can pick who he liked better? jk.

great job with this chapter and the last one. they make me laugh so hard. i'm glad that something makes me happy.

and if you ever need anyone to talk to, e-mail me. i'll gladly listen to you and try and help out in any way that i can.

hope you update soon,
inc
person riddle-me-yellow
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, a very lovely lip splitting chapter *insert teh love here*. hehehe Cant wait for the next chapter. Stalkers are fun <3. Please keep up the greatwork! And also, I AM lovin this fic as much as I was lovin Chasing Naruto.
person chelzi
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! this was so great! ^_^ i lovers it!! gaara's so funny... hehe!! and so clueless and dumb... aw, the poor baby. at least naru is fixing him!! his first ever erection... he's so cute. i can't wait to see what happens with sasuke and neji and the other stalkers. sai's probably one. and hinata, maybe? oh well! please update soon! i can't wait to see the next chapter!~
person DragonBlue
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just to let you know i love this chapter. I seriously fell out of my chair and nearly cracked my head open and i didnt care because i was laughing so dam hard. NARUTO GIVING GAARA A SWIRLY! LOFL. I love this fic and you should have more than 15 reviews by now so update FAST FAST FAST!
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. The lipstick bit was amazing XD. Poor Garaa. However I dont think he found the toilet fitting for a first date XD
person jadebyrd
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wahhhh!!! that was sooo cute!!! i love this chapter! all that adorable GaaNaru fluff...i mean don't get me wrong, i am a hardcore SasuNaru fan but you just portrayed Gaara and Naruto so nicely together! Now i can't wait for what a great job you're gonna do with Sasuke and Naruto!!! Update! Update! Update!
person mike~
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter!

i really loved the gar/naru momment! they're really adorable with each other. althou ive always been a sasunaru fan, i still can't help wishing the other boys the best.

i loved the sasuke stalking thou... in a limo w/ wine? lol. the best

update soon!