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by desolatebutterfly

schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic writing. I do hope I can expect more like this from you in the future.
Amazing.
Great job.
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. It captures their essence perfectly. You did an extraordinary job.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one is beautiful, and it breaks my heart. Thank you for posting it.
person Kei
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of the way their relationship is; the distance seems right although Sasuke feels a bit too grown up. The style is also in the direction that I like - not overly descriptive and full of useless details, although it turns muddled around the part of how their thing started. Basically quite good but could do with more editing to tighten it up.
person Sekre
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job :) Very angsty.
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This is such a good,angsty story. The characters seemed so real and sad. I almost cried. Please write more!!