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for Kyuubi's Fiancée

by KiaraNxiar

person Anon
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it!! keep it up
person Sugary
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that last chapter with the pond made me laugh so hard!! (i don't know if it was intended to be funny or not but it was to me) I really like how to portrayed sasuke. The whole shirt thing was so trivial, but it was the biggest deal to the 4 of them (sakura, kyuubi, naruto, sasuke) I liked it alot. continue plz!
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update sooon! MWahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more so please email me hehehehe!!
person Dragon7
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto can be so clueless sometimes. I love the fact that Naruto is the dominate and uke Sasuke and I really love pregnant Sasuke. Keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

P.S. YOUR STORIES ROCK
person acisse
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Love the story please update soon ^-^.
person Ann
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Kyuubi will explain that to Naruto...
SOO Wanna Know what happens Pliz write the next chapter soon
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. You updated! When I checked my e-mail box, I was extremely delighted to read that you had updated. Things are starting to heat up. I love the fact that Naruto is the dominate in this story. It very indearing to see him as the dominate one considering his lack of sexual expirience and cluelessness. I love it.

Please update soon!

~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~

justice02908@yahoo.com
person Sourita Kinomoto
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. can't wait for the next chapter. wonder what the surprise in store for sasuke is. well gotta go. update soon please. ja ne ^_^
person evilchild(not signed in)
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope we see more of this soon! I want to know what the surprise is! I'm assuming that you put fiancee to keep it as a woman instead of a man, right? That makes wonder what the 'surprise' is going to be. If it's anywhere near what I'm thinking it's going to put to put a huge smile on my face! I really hope we don't have to wait too long to find out!
person Niiro_Yuuyake
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful second chapter! I enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what happens next. Kakashi seeing the bite-mark(off to tell Tsunade), Naruto getting the wrong message from Kyuubi, thinking he wants to eat Sasu-chan! Tsunade kinda figuring out what's going on with Kyuubi....*screams* I don't think I can wait for more!! Update soon, PLEASE!!

-Niiro Yuuyake