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for Kyuubi's Fiancée

by KiaraNxiar

person Selow
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i noticed one misspelling. it should be 'dwell' instead of 'duel' in the places you've used it.
other than that, i found kyuubi's expertise in human feelings a little farfetched. figuring he's a demon fox whose relationship with human beings so far has involved large quantities of blood and death. then again, if you can make a plausible explanation for it...
person kaesaku
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah~
me likey!
kyuubi's sooo cute~
..having a crush on sasuke~
hehe.. ^^
'hope you write soon!
i'll be waiting~
^^
person Raven
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story Naruto, Sasuke and Kyuubi are so kawaii I can't what to for the next chapter and see how your going to make sasuke pregnant Please keep on writing and update soon really really soon.