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for Mr. Alarming, Mr. Charming

by SaintGabriel

schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.Now THAT Was Different.And Very...Disturbing.Strangely...Erotic,Too.

I Love The Casual,I-Don't-Give-A-F*** Writing Style.It Adds To The Morose-ness.

Update Soon!

P.S. Hinata Was Quote OOC.That's Intentional,Right?
person *~hearts`*
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice work. alittle creepy and scary but nice work!
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't care what the other guy said. Your story line is awesome!!! Move your ass and get the next chapter online!
person James
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looks interesting