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I think that sasuke should have tripets two boys and a girl.
The girls name should be Akane means madder or red dye, Hinako means Child of harmanious days,or last but not least Hitomi means Beautiful virtue.

The boys names should be Arashi means storm, hitoshi means Benevolence,Kazuhiko means Peaceful boy, ....... Or Kira means Dark.

i think saiken is a good name because it means rebuilding, reconstruction, & rehabilitation but it also means difficult friendship, to be strangely bonded, & a mysterious soul conection

It's been over a year since you updated this wonderful fic...I think it's too late to try and encourage you to finish it and I'm sure you must've lost all inspiration by now. Well, I was fortunate enough to read atleast some of it. Thanks for your hardwork. It was a really impressive and detailed story.

I think you have a pretty good story here, I hope you intend to continue it. Thanks for sharing.

hmm.. the only name i have is for a girl, and seeing as you didn't specify the gender, she's technically an unfinished original character i created for Naruto but i decided to share the name... Benihime, it means the crimson princess, ... Name given to her because of the crimson tint in her other wise black eyes... i figure since kyuubi has his hand in things that it wouldn't be too far fetched for the kid to end up with crimson in his or her eyes. I have no boy names but if i think of one i'll let you know

I am so happy that you're writing. I've been waiting for the "Classic" Naru/Sasu fic and this one has all the makings of one. I hope you continue with it because I am super curious to see where you go with it and how you pull it out in the end.
Keep up the great work!
I'll be watching you and cheering you on.

'Tessa

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. quana_amos@yahoo.com

So glad to see you continuing this story! I think mini Naruto+Sasuke should be named Kari or Kaileena if its a girl; or Yuri or Keita if its a boy. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

plez continue its good plezzzzz

I've already reviewed on ff.net where I have an account but just had to review here as I was rereading the story. This is without doubt the best mpreg I've read~ I love the interaction you've created between Naruto and Sasuke, which is so deep and yet tentative due to their situation, and Kyuubi's manipulative plan is ingenious. You're writing ability is brilliant~ the development of the story clear, and imaginative.

I know you said you wanted constructive criticism, so I guess the only thing that bothers me is how quickly Sasuke became emotional in this last chapter, although I can honestly see why he did. He was in a very emotional situation very quickly and I can see how that would become overwhelming even though we haven't seen the canon Sasuke like that (however, there are many times he shows he's very much driven by his emotions) so, that constructive criticism really goes down the drain huh? ^_^

In your profile you said you were looking for baby names, and I really hope you choose somethng Japanese ^^ I dunno if you're still looking but I had a little look on this site: (and I hope html works on adultfanfiction~ I've actually never really reviewed here before ^^ if it doesn't feel welcome to email me) http://japanese.about.com/library/weekly/aa072303a.htm I don't know what gender, but for boys I liked Hiroshi, Reiji, or maybe Takeshi ^^ I really don't know what you're thinking about but that site has lots of names to choose from :) of course it'd be super sweet if they had a girl as well. lol.

ok, well~ hopefully that helped, I love you're story and really hope you update soon :) sorry this review turned into a monster!