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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I like it so far. You have a knack for descriptions, don't you? Though I like dialogues a little bit more I deem it difficult with the current state of Sasuke. So, the flow of the story is good and I am curious where this will go (okay, pregnancy lies ahead ;-)). Oh and I am not too fond of a lemon with female Sasuke (as it is, he is feminine enough :D).
Oh and to the reviewer that wanted a warning for Naru/Sasu: There is a warning at the beginning of every chapter and Naruto is definitely not everbodys uke!
So get us more :-)
Nathaniel
I like it so far. You have a knack for descriptions, don't you? Though I like dialogues a little bit more I deem it difficult with the current state of Sasuke. So, the flow of the story is good and I am curious where this will go (okay, pregnancy lies ahead ;-)). Oh and I am not too fond of a lemon with female Sasuke (as it is, he is feminine enough :D).
Oh and to the reviewer that wanted a warning for Naru/Sasu: There is a warning at the beginning of every chapter and Naruto is definitely not everbodys uke!
So get us more :-)
Nathaniel
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool story
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes Yes a lemon we must have lemon.!!! You write so descriptly that a lemon would be wonderful . No rush real live must come before fun . I 'm just glad your not leaving this fic unfished, to many authors do that or just lose intrest . looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like your writing style and I can't wait to check out the next chapter or your other stories!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like how this story is shaping up, I like the depth of intellectual and emotional involvement and I always love an older, more serious Naruto, I thik it's sexy as all hell. As to the sexy no jutso lemon, it would be cool but wouldn't that be really weird for Sasuke? Actually, yeah I would really like to read that, if not only to know how that would make him feel, it would be trippy I want to see where you're going with this I think it's a great idea and the execution makes it way better.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lmao, I think that Sasuke should turn back to into a man while they're doing it.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto/Sasuke lemon would be great, sexy jutsu or not! (that's a yes for lemon XD) I hope you will be able to update sooner this time! your story is really good!
Hinata-chan
Hinata-chan
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see a lemon with Sasuke in sexy no jitsu!! Love your story so far. Please continue!!!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! Love it so far! Please hurry and update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens with Naruto and Sasuke!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
brlliant!!!