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by KiaraNxiar

person dancingkitsune
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah the chapters are so short >.O

I cant wait for the next chapter

good luck with it!!
person feisu
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story, pls update soon
person Bookworm51485
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke being the pregnant one in a pairing with him and Naruto is just wrong to me. He's really not at all the pregnant, nurturing type. I just see him more as the "Hmmmm.....pregnant huh? Well that's an abortion for me" type. *Sigh* And I got all excited when I saw the mpreg label. Oh well. I did read the first chapter and I think your a good writer, I just think Sasuke pregnant is just (as odd as it seems considering the situation) completely unrealistic. Not physically unrealistic, though with Sasuke it is harder to explain than with Naruto, but because of his personality.
person sharkie
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this and it seems like you put quite alot of thought into the envents in this fic. It will be interesting to see where this goes and I hope you don't abandon this fic...
Sharkie
person Dragon
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter your right there are not many decent stories featuring Sasuke pregnant so I am glad that you decided to write two of them. Is Sasuke all girl or does he have male parts anyway update soon.
person sadistickiss
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds cool so far ^^. It's well written and interesting. There isn't going to be any het in this, is there? Anyway, update soon~!
person Meemei
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOH! This is just too good. Update! Update! Wow, I just can't wait to see how this turns out!
person Hiromi
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o_0
omg!
your story is like...a poem in a sorta way.
i luve it!
person Inus_Kagome_Forever
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was evil! An evil cliffy I say! Update update! Please? lol Thisi is seriously good! (so does Sasuke know the sexy jutsu now? lol)

Inus_Kagome_Forever
person harus
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so awesome. Can't wait for more >_< . Mpreg rocks hard. Sasuke a mother for once? Interesting.