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for Gift

by Cepheus

schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh.... that was hot. and sexy. and oooooooooh. good job. that was cute, and i loved the pairing! great job, and i would LOVE to see a sequel!~
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked a lot! Must see a sequal!
person SGOU
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I loved it. I love how Neji and Shika have made Naruto's birthday a good day.
person yaoifan01
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder can it work? More smex please! -offers hand- hummmm, anyways I love threesomes -sandwiched Naruto xD- You best write a sequel or Umi-san will cry. Hahah jk. only if you want to. Hopefully once I have free time -fuckiin exams- I can continue reviewing you. Ja! I cheated I already read this and reviewed xP But -shrugs- Write more eh love?

Over and Out.

_yaoifan01
person Zigana
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really like. Sequel?...hmmm.
person Phantom Cutie
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this! It was so cute and sexy! ^^ A sequeal would be awesome!
person Emma
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. That was, in one word, amazing! Absolutely amazing! *sighs* I definitely want a sequel! Please write one? ^^ Anyways, that was lovely :D Keep up the good work.
person Avid Fan
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A sequal would be very intertaining to read
That is one of the most erotic threesomes Ive ever read
YOu have a very talented mind, if not a little perverted, but hey, Im reading it
SO anyway, keep up the good work champ

Arigato
person Nakashima Chiaki
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, I got lost a little bit in the lemon, but that might be might fault as I was knida distracted. A sequel would be nice...WITH SASUKE!!!! lol >^_^<
person Shorty*
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... wow, what a story! Interesting threesome, but well-executed. Lovely gift. ;)