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by Cepheus

person NANA
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uwahhh~~awesome sex scene! (>////<) *blushes* t-that was great! sequel please~~~
person Heaven_Is_Hell
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O Oh... My... Gaahh... * falls over *

~*~*~*~*Five Hours Later~*~*~*~*

* has finally recovered * That was..... Mind-blowing... ^____^
person dimonyo-anghel
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! But shouldn't this story be put under the threesome category even if it's a shounen-ai? I'm happy for Naruto! I love Shikamaru!!
person ChaoticSpecter
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed reading this. i like this threesome. i also think that a sequel is in order. i'd be happy to read it if you actually write it. good job.
person jess
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww! that was so adorable... and so freakin' hot... ahhH! you are amazing! that was... wow. O.o hotness to the max! i love the threesome, too... they go so well together! thank you so so so sooooo much! *HUG* *kisses* love you!
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet, you did a real good job on this. This was a one shot right, I'll make it a point to search for more of ur fics. Keep writing ur good at it!
person sadistickiss
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shiver* Ohhh.. that was so... *blush* ahem lovely. XD!! Squee!! Omg how hot *_*!!! We all love hot bishies in a threesome XP. That wasn't even the best of it either! Because Naruto got a happy ending *dances*. Aw! I love Naruto XP! And I'm sure he loves you too, for the damn amazing birthday party you threw him ^^.

I have to admit I'm a SasuNaru fan. THEREFORE, I am very glad you did not include him in this <-- doesn't like to share Sasuke. Shika and Neji were so cool (actually, the word 'smooth' comes to mind for some reason.). So yeah, thanks for the fantastic fic ^^, write more!

*mantra* sequel. sequel. sequel. sequel....
person sunsparked
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that is so hot!!!
person Mukki
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy... I wish I got gifts like that for my birthday >.o
person Anna
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm certainly not a fan of Shikamaru, and not so much of a a fan from Neji, but this certainly got my attention. A sequel will be nice, I'll be sure to look around for it if you decide to write it.