AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Don't Forget To Swallow

by desolatebutterfly

schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how great this is. Wonderfully sexy, it kept me riveted with my mouth hanging open like an idiot. And I just love how in character Sasuke is. Hot sex and a realistic Sasuke makes for the best fanfics. Bravo!
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was So. Freaking. Hilarious. *hands you a sticker*
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is awesome badass funny with a kick of sweet at the end. Love it.
person AJAngelique
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweeeeet!
person Rabid Yaoi Fangirl
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XDD!! Hilarious! Usually, I skip to the good parts when reading fics on this site, but I couldn't help but read through this one. I enjoyed every minute of it. Keep up the awesome work, I must be off to read the rest of your fics.
person innerchild
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm.... interesting flavor there. i wouldn't be surprised if they actually sold something like that at a novelty or joke shop. anywho, away from sexual foods, great job with this. it was funny... and ha, sauske's a minute man--he's gonna have to learn how to uh... hold it, i guess, if he's gonna be with naruto!

-inc