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by desolatebutterfly

person Anon
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)

Kiss: Very hot. I like how Sasuke admits to himself at least that he likes Naruto’s roughness.

Grind: Also very hot. Great imagery.

Pulse: “the nights he doesn’t sleep at all.” Sounds like it’s for a positive reason for once.

Heat: Love the eroticism of the first line. ____ Lol, good ending line.

Rim: (*MEGABLUSH*) Ó.Ò

Come Undone: Haha, that first line surprised me. ^^ ____ I certainly like this more than Sasuke wanting the silence like in the other fic.

NICE! MOAR! MOAR!
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.......those were hott and "pulse" was sweet.....i liked it very much ^__^
person blisblop
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great fun.I could read tons more.Rim and Sas reaction and the first from sas's pov was hot.
person sadistickiss
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ka-Ka-Kawaii!!! XD!!! *squee* Aww, that was such an awesome piece XD. Kinda hot, but uber awesome =P. It's great to read something completely fluffy once in a while, and this just made me smile ^^. Thanks for writing it, I love it =3.
person Nana
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot. It was all.... and the heartbeat one. Sasuke not being able to sleep and... urg... I love it. IC and really... mwa ha XD!
person Cesia
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree. That was very hot. It puts noon time in the middle of summer over here to shame. ^o^ hehe
person Jackee
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans self*

that was....hot, to say the least. XD