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for Immerse

by MatarielnoTenshi

person Stef
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really don't see why you bothered to post this. Your "drabbles" as you call them contain nothing, they are too short and without detail, I don't see why you even bothered to write them. And your "summary" is a joke. You have just about every warning label listed in your summary; you've made the page side scroll, which is extremely annoying. You should consider cutting your warning labels in half.
person lo
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marysues really suck and are not really welcome here.
person triggerbox
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
these are good beginnings but you need to finish them. They feel like prologues not one-shots