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I have to say I love it. It was very well written, but I also have to say a little disappointed. Don't get me wrong I loved reading it but when I see SasuNaru on there just expect to see Sasuke as the seme and Naruto uke. I noticed they became close extremely quickly. Also I was waiting for a big finish of them having a night together but it kinds left us hanging. I would love to see more done by you. Keep up the great work!

~Akira~

Just want to let you know what a great and long fic you have here. I wished it was longer though.....since I fell absolutely in love with all of your characters. Keep up the great work! :D

ahh i just read the first chapter and a half so far but i just felt like commenting. i really like how you portrayed sasuke's character, that seems exactly like what he would be like if his family hadn't been killed ^_^ nahh that makes me so sad, he was such a cutie when he was seven, when he wassn't all rrr itachi must die and so for some twisted reason that means i must hide my emotions and never smile >.<

aww... it's over! ;_; that's sad... i loved that last paragraph: 'and thus endeth the story of the bastard and his paralyzed something... and their trials and tribulations... and their sex'. 'fugaku and mitoko went to buy lingerie'. 'arashi spent the rest of his life playing golf'. 'sex toys'. 'disturbing their neighbors'. 'gave up on grandkids'. it was all good... yay happy/corny ending!!~

Aww the end...it was sweet. I really enjoyed the story. I can't wait to read more stories from you.

Aww so bittersweet. I can't wait to see what's in store. This is one of my favorite stories. I love you for this story! Really I do!

That's my weak spot, I hate goodbye's - it always get's me choked up I mean I litterally felt a gaping whole in my chest just imagining that scene - anyway, t was nice *delicate sniff* and I liked it. Hope you post the epilogue soon.

Ja!
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Wow, I would just like to say thank-you for making Naruto realistic and sensible when it came to the whole marriage thing. I’m not saying that high-school marriages don’t work out, but the people involved in them often do not allow each other to grow and change, ultimately causing the marriages to fail. After all, the decision-making part of a persons brain doesn’t even fully mature until they reach the age of 25. Therefore, although I love a WAFF ending just as much as the next person, maybe even more so, but I still like to see some realistic-ness in a fic every now and then. I think that Naruto’s refusal of Sasuke’s marriage offer made the ending of the fic only that much better. It really shows how important their relationship is to Naruto to allow them both the opportunity to become who they will be, before binding themselves together. Anyway though, I can’t wait for the epilogue. I’m really curious to see what will happen to our dobe and bastard and how/if they have changed. I’m really looking forward to it and I hope you don’t leave your devoted readers hanging for long. My best wishes for you and your writing.

GAH!! stupid sasuke-teme!!! what the fucking hell is wrong with him????? oh, but naru felt it! when sasuke tried, naru could FEEL the pain!! that's bad, but good. cause he can FEEL now. sorta. DAMN IT SASUKE!!! GO FUCKING DIE IN A HOLE, BITCH!!! (that's sasuke the bitch...) please update soon, i really like this fic!!~