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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I really have nothing to say but that this story is one of the best I've seen so far. Nice job with this! ^^ Hope to see another chapter up sometime soon! ^^
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! ^^ Well I might be late for the vote but hey, what the heck. I vote for SasuNaru! Naru seems so uke, and Sasuke Seme. I dunno, it just...seems. ^ ^
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you have kept up with this story. The developing relationships with ItachixKyubi and SasukexNaruto are not just touching and sweet, but also full of humor. I really look forward to your updates.
Keep up the GREAT work!
Keep up the GREAT work!
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!^^
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't exactly know how i would describe this chapter, but it has something in it that always endears me to a story. i think it's when a group of people finally see an unexpected side to an important character... i just love when that happens!
and when naruto says "lived in," i'm assuming he means "f***ed in." ahahaha i think for their first time it should be sasunaru, just because sasuke just screams seme, at first, mind.
anyway, great chapter! update soon!
and when naruto says "lived in," i'm assuming he means "f***ed in." ahahaha i think for their first time it should be sasunaru, just because sasuke just screams seme, at first, mind.
anyway, great chapter! update soon!
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok ummmm to answer your question. I think naruto should be the uke and Sasuke should be the seme. I mean don't you think Naruto's personality and innocent behavior, as well as his disability better qualifies him as a uke of the relationship? Plus as for sasuke's personality, don't you think he's better suited for the seme. I mean sasuke has a perfect, calm, rude, and dominate air to him. To me he seemes very possessive and strong. And not to be rude but naruto may be laud, clumsy, and strong (in his own way) But he also strikes me as a innocent, pure, sexy, beautiful, and.......How do I put it?........fragile and Delicate person. To me the only position naruto should be in is the catcher..........The underdog........The uke ^^. Lol anyway loved your story and I hope you update soon. sasuke x naruto ^_~ Latter
Kisses ^_~
Kisses ^_~
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!
i vote to NaruSasu!! at their first time.
Sasuke is SO CUTE when he's with Naruto...
i vote to NaruSasu!! at their first time.
Sasuke is SO CUTE when he's with Naruto...
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why do people always want to have angst in their lovestories? ^.^
I really really like fluff and i love the chapters so far :-)
I really really like fluff and i love the chapters so far :-)
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hai. Although I read your story, I never reviewed it. Don't worry, I like it ( I actually cheered when Naruto punched Sasuke XD I also love your Kyuubi/Itachi/Kyuubi pairing) and will continue reading.
Can I still vote? If I can, I pick NaruSasu. There is already so much SasuNaru out there, but that's not the reason I chose the pairing. I have the feeling if it is SasuNaru, not only will Naruto be sitting in a wheelchair, but on a donut aswell (poor kid's butt). Even though Sasuke is ussually described as tough, dominant and whatnot...he can be while being bottom. He can guide Naruto...uh....in him, so to say. (Also, I had this lovely (nosebleed inducing) image of Naruto leaning over Sasuke.) So here's my vote. Hope it helps. Good luck writing and I can't wait till next update.
ja ne ^^V
Can I still vote? If I can, I pick NaruSasu. There is already so much SasuNaru out there, but that's not the reason I chose the pairing. I have the feeling if it is SasuNaru, not only will Naruto be sitting in a wheelchair, but on a donut aswell (poor kid's butt). Even though Sasuke is ussually described as tough, dominant and whatnot...he can be while being bottom. He can guide Naruto...uh....in him, so to say. (Also, I had this lovely (nosebleed inducing) image of Naruto leaning over Sasuke.) So here's my vote. Hope it helps. Good luck writing and I can't wait till next update.
ja ne ^^V
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I like your story so far. Good fluff now and then couldn't do any damage :-) In my opinion angst is overrated ;-)
Your style is "cool" because it has an easy flow in it. You start reading and hit the end of a chapter faster as you wish to. Keep that way!
I think I'm too late to vote for their first time, though I'm giving you my opinion nonetheless. I'm a big fan of NaruSasu and therefore I vote for that. Not only is there way too much SasuNaru out there with a submissive Naruto, who just behaves like Hinata and clings to Sasuke as if he has lost his spine, but their personalities are leading to a couple that takes turns in sexual intercourse with a slightly more "active" (don't think dominant suits here) Naruto (in my humble opinion). It wonders me to no end that people see Naruto as the innocent, obedient partner in a relationship with Sasuke. Are these people watching the same anime as I do? Naruto is hyperactive, loud, feral and unpredictable and at the same moment caring and giving. He surely is one to enjoy being loved and cared for but I think he more then occasionly likes to give the direction and caress his partner. Sasuke has to be the best in everything, the surrounding puts a lot of pressure on him and he seems to have to have control in most situations. But in a relationship and especially during intimate moments these people tend to like it to not have to be in charge of everything. To just let go, be cared for and enjoy receiving tender attention. Though he won't be anywere near a squealing uke - another thing that tips me of. The whole seme/uke constellation that seems to cement position during sex after the first time. In my mind that simply does not reflect most homosexual relationships. So NaruSasuNaru for the win :-)
Okay, that was long, but you asked for it, didn't you?
So, I'm curious what your story will bring!
Best wishes
Nathaniel
I like your story so far. Good fluff now and then couldn't do any damage :-) In my opinion angst is overrated ;-)
Your style is "cool" because it has an easy flow in it. You start reading and hit the end of a chapter faster as you wish to. Keep that way!
I think I'm too late to vote for their first time, though I'm giving you my opinion nonetheless. I'm a big fan of NaruSasu and therefore I vote for that. Not only is there way too much SasuNaru out there with a submissive Naruto, who just behaves like Hinata and clings to Sasuke as if he has lost his spine, but their personalities are leading to a couple that takes turns in sexual intercourse with a slightly more "active" (don't think dominant suits here) Naruto (in my humble opinion). It wonders me to no end that people see Naruto as the innocent, obedient partner in a relationship with Sasuke. Are these people watching the same anime as I do? Naruto is hyperactive, loud, feral and unpredictable and at the same moment caring and giving. He surely is one to enjoy being loved and cared for but I think he more then occasionly likes to give the direction and caress his partner. Sasuke has to be the best in everything, the surrounding puts a lot of pressure on him and he seems to have to have control in most situations. But in a relationship and especially during intimate moments these people tend to like it to not have to be in charge of everything. To just let go, be cared for and enjoy receiving tender attention. Though he won't be anywere near a squealing uke - another thing that tips me of. The whole seme/uke constellation that seems to cement position during sex after the first time. In my mind that simply does not reflect most homosexual relationships. So NaruSasuNaru for the win :-)
Okay, that was long, but you asked for it, didn't you?
So, I'm curious what your story will bring!
Best wishes
Nathaniel