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for Learn to Love (Complete)

by Midnightstorm

person Donedin
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how you threw Shukaku in there as a waiter, it was really clever... and are Sasuke and Itachi going to make up and have everyone happy in the end?! Cause that would be cool. And BTW you can fax that brownie to me ^_^.
person honeysuckelvine
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate to revew but am doing it just for you! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!
person t
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going i love it
person koiiru
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Itachi/Kyuubi! Why there isn't more of that pairing I'll never know... Keep it up!
person Emma
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
forgot one thing..... You really should tone down the "dobe" bit. Sasuke doesn't need to say it in every sentence, you know. ;)
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, for a while I would see your fic, consider reading it, and then move on to another fic. However, since I’ve loved everything else that you’ve written I decided to give “Learn to Love” a chance and boy am I glad that I did! I loved the way you made Kyuubi into Naruto’s SEXY older brother! It was brilliant! I never would have thought to put Itachi and Kyuubi together but I think that it could become one of my favorite pairings.
You have this amazing talent to come up with the most original storylines I’ve seen in a while and I’m always excited to see what you’ll come up with next. Provided you update more often than every six months, you could easily become one of my absolute favorite authors. I look forward to the updates of all your fics! Regardless though, my best wishes for you and your writing.



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person Tati
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I'm a sucker for fics when one of the characters has some sort of disability. I love seeing someone brave enough to write such a challenging subject. Knowing how to develop the story with the right amount of vulnerability is difficult. So far, you have not disappointed. I love the developing rapport between Sasuke and Naruto. But what has really got me hooked now is this KyubixItachi pairing. Don't get me wrong I love SasuNaru, but the KyuxIta was unexpected. I can't wait to see where you are going with this fic.
person Donedin
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TEHE! That was awesome, at first when you said red hair I instantly thought Gaara, but then BAM you made it FOXBOY! And DAMN! Do you ever post fast! Whew, not that im complaning thow! I really enjoy this story, can't wait to find out what happens next! ^_^ PLEASE POST SOON!
person pati
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE Your story! ;* Keep going!!
person Briryan
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) Looking forward to the next.