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for A Lady's First Kiss

by tootalltygerlily

person Chocolat
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was wonderful ^.^ Short and sweet. SakuKaka and NaruSasu are two of my fav parings.
person Dittolily
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh!! That was way too short!

You must continue it! Kakashi and Sakura -> so hot!

We need more Kakashi-sensei and Sakura!!!
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It feels unfinished, or mostly like a teaser for a longer fic that'll never get written. It also flows really sedately, so there's no real build-up to the end. It's nicely written, but it definitely leaves the reader hanging and feeling slightly disappointed.
person koham
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!....THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!.....i love kakasaku....and reading any fic about them brings tears of joy to my eyes.....lol....anyway...ur fic was really GREAT!!!....i loved it...but i was wondering....are u gonna continue it...?...caz it'd be awsome if u do....so PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!.....^_^