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for The Bastard

by Midnightstorm

schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i loved every second and every detail it was absolutely wondiferous lol thank you so much for finishing i absolutely loved it in every sense of the word!!!! i look forward to other pieces by you lol thanks for posting!!! and a happy new year!!!!
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing fic, I loved it! no wonder you won a prize for this, cause it's so great! take care. hugs
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke can't be dead... I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
And is the story really over?
That's so sad...
Please update soon!
You know you want to!!!
XD Lane
person hisoka
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha good ending i knew sasuke wouldnt die but i didnt think about sai helping.hope you decide to create something new soon no pressure just wistful thinking yano. congrads of the end and all i wish you luck.



~hisoka kurosaki
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story. i am not going to lie and say that at first i was hesitant to read it because i was afraid you was not going to finish it like the guardian so i waited until you had a couple of chapters under your belt. i am glad i read it thou because it is a really good story and it is a regency romance and i really really like that. i can't wait to see the next chapter. and i hope that your inspiration for the guardian returns cause i would not mind reading that as well.
person Gwyllion
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Oh wow! It's been a long time since seeing an update. i am very happy to seeing one from you. Thanks so much for sharing! I'm really wondering what sasuke have up his sleeve. For some reasons, I think th gun wound may be fake just to test oro there. Can't wait to see what happens next! <3
person samchan
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like you story.
I like how you put things together and make the scene natural. ♥

Btw, are you this is SasuNaru???
It seems that this is turning out to be NaruSasu, which I hope not...
But if it is, I still like your story. ^^♥
person hisoka
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i dought(cant spell) hes dead, it must be some trick or something or he really was shot and will live. that was smart though. hope you can update soon
person Godsx
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was interesting, thought Minato's exuse sucks. Whatever his intentions were - his first duty was to protect his children no matter what, he failed, he wants to claim Naruto as his son, but he has no right besides that of a blood. Not just that - he tells everyone he's naruto's father attracting unwanted attention. So - no exuses here.
person hisoka
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whats with the father hatred? hope you can update soon