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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH!!! I love your story, I Can't wait for the next chappy!!!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you write just like a professional. I love the old english talk! You rock! I need more! SasukexNaruto forever!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ne, this was very good. If I do say so myself. But what really got to me was the many chances for them to kiss! Every time I was like, "Come on........coooommmmee onnnnnnn!" Then something happned and I said, "NOOOOOOOOO!.....damn." lol. So, yea. That`s kindda my way of sayin` that I liked it and to plz update as soon as u can.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughing my little ass off here*
Such a good ending to a really good chapter. You really made my day :) Now I can continue with a smile on my lips. *thumbs up* Of course men never can understand women... that would be just too.... weird if they did.
Such a good ending to a really good chapter. You really made my day :) Now I can continue with a smile on my lips. *thumbs up* Of course men never can understand women... that would be just too.... weird if they did.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, this is my favorite chapter by far!! for one thing, it was quite long. and the development of emotions between the two! wonderful! i can't wait for the next chapter. oooo, and a kiss. i want them to at least kiss!! or have they already? i can't remember. so when you do write it, make it *memorable*.
update soon!
update soon!
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Undate... Peaz. It's funny and sad and I want them to kiss.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6 wasa hysterical! I love sasuke as a girl! Please let them get married and be a lovely lovely couple, as either gay or faux-straight!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My God! I love the story... Naruto and Sasuke in here is so cute in their banters.. Sasuke is getting Jealous.. i like that.. haha... hope you will update soon ne? Please do!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story makes meow so happy! Especially how fast you up date!!! Please up date often! It's so good. Meow wishes that next scene will be with Naruto killing someone - cos Sasuke needs to see the other side of Naruto - the Fox. That would be great.
Enyway, meow waits for up date!
Enyway, meow waits for up date!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot, and I especially like that I thought you were going to take this fic in one direction, and then you completely surprised me by taking it in another. I also have to say that the direction you actually took it in is much more interesting then the one I thought it was going to be. Your portrayal of Sasuke and Naruto are amazing. I hope you plan on making this a Naru/Sasu fic because based on the characters you have developed that seems most natural.
However, it seems like at times you are more focused on trying to keep the language authentic of the period, and therefore it is causing the actual fic to suffer. Details are becoming muddled; inaccuracies are taking place, etc. This is not to say that your fic is horrible, far from it in fact. However, I would rather see the story itself take more of your focus as opposed to the language itself. However, do with it what you will. As I have already said, I like this story and I plan to vote for it as well. My best wishes for you and your writing.
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
However, it seems like at times you are more focused on trying to keep the language authentic of the period, and therefore it is causing the actual fic to suffer. Details are becoming muddled; inaccuracies are taking place, etc. This is not to say that your fic is horrible, far from it in fact. However, I would rather see the story itself take more of your focus as opposed to the language itself. However, do with it what you will. As I have already said, I like this story and I plan to vote for it as well. My best wishes for you and your writing.
Dryad1789@hotmail.com