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for The Bastard

by Midnightstorm

person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man, i love period pieces! i'm so glad you updated this one! i was hoping some spaniards would attack the nine tails, and sasuke could see naruto in action, but there's always later in the story, ne? update soon!
person Trollmia
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No matter what - a chapter in a good story is always far too short... *lol* And this was short in that sense... But oh so good... I look forward to reading the next part whenever it is due... *thumbs up*
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is so interesting! i can't wait until you update! oh, and not only should naruto take him on, he will take him on. i'm sure of it. now write it! j/k just keep up the good job
person Meow
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meow likes this story very much! Don't leave it, please - it's very interesting. And yes, sasuke is a spoile brat!
person Mangagirl D.J.
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He has to help Sasuke other wise the story wouldn't go along if he didn't. And I don't want Sasuke to be HANGED:(!
person Darling_425
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kya! Damn you! The cliffy! lol
Can't wait for more!
I think Naruto should say yes (after putting a No No fight ;)!
person Foxy smile 717
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think the way you're writing this story is wonderful! especially the old world setting, ITS BRILLIENT! i definetly think naruto will take sasuke because he's just so sweet like that ;-)
person kenjikitten
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this setting is a nice change of pace from all the other stories. i can't wait to see what happens next!
person Mangagirl D.J.
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far :). This is a very interesting story you got here, what era is this SasuNaru set up in. Please update as soon as possible!
person AkaNeko
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... The speech is a little hard to adjust to, but I think you're doing a really good job. I wouldn't be able to write dialogue for that time period. I can't wait to see what happens next.