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for The Bad Boy and the Baby

by Midnightstorm

person Anon
schedule December 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When will you update next
person hinatauchiha21
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this story update soon okay
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
finish finish finish!!! you do know that there are a TON of people who haven't read this because they have joined AFTER you last posted on this (like me!) so you HAVE to start adding more so that it will show up on the 'latest' list and more people can read it!!!!
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The last time this story got an update was few years back...so it's another abandoned story?
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
I found this a while ago and I didn't like it.
I think it was because you draged in non-naruto charactrers, it's kind of a turnoff.
But now, I hate you a little bit. Why are you making Sasuke cheat? That's the worst, unforgivable, unforgettable act a partner can do! You make me hate Sasuke and just when I want to kill him you make him ADORABLE! And it's like JESUS, make up your mind writer!!! Hahahahahahha

So hm, will this be finished as a SasuNaru? You can probably see my emal, otherwise contact me on ff.net (electrostatic) or review my story with you're answer. Because it would be the most epic ending, the show that love CAN win after all. Work on ;)

/electrostatic
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you planning to finish this?? Just curious cuz I don't want to start reading if it's not :$. I'd be really happy if you could let me know...
person hisoka
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
such a loyal husband who could throw that away.hope sasuke thinks of something soon before he looses his dedicates husband's trust and his families.
person Gwyllion
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries* My heart broke every time Naruto was hurt or in pain. I hate Sasuke so much right now. Ran totally should be the new caretaker of Naruto and his baby. You did a good job writing this, tho I noticed a few typos here and there. But all in all a great read! Can't wait to read more from you. And thanks so much for continuing this fic! :)
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke wasn't even there for his baby to be born and he keeps putting Naruto second on the list no matter how many times he is told subtly or point blank that he is going to lose the blonde dobe. And Naruto... so understanding even though he doesn't understand or deserve Sasuke's motives and treatment.
I feel so horrible for Naruto...
And I want to kick Sasuke's ass which means you must be writing him in character because that's how I always feel.
And then, even wanting to kick his ass, I feel horrible for him... that he is so stupid as to think that people can't 'fall out' of love. Better grab him quick Uchiha.
Sigh... until the next.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! A little girl :3 Thats so cute! *giggles like an idiot* I love "Ran" greated OC ever and I've always /hated/ OCs XD

I have no idea whats gonna happen next but I'm totally looking forward to it! Thanks for the great update! ^_^