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for The Bad Boy and the Baby

by Midnightstorm

schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha hey! okay after our talk last night i didn't get time to finish this chap up until now! haha so i really did like it, i liked the ending how naru was there to make sure he was okay and everything, but the look of horror shocked me, was he shocked to see naruto there or was it something else...so yes1 I shall stay turned!
person bluesake
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this continue please!!
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes yes yes I love your story so far. Lol O and I love the fact that sasuke is so into Naruto. Lol. ^^ Anyway update soon. ok. update update update.....Reson is.....I'm addicted. Ok so update. Update now....(JK). But please do update soon ok....Caues I really am addicted. But O well.....Anyway see you soon.
Kisses ^_~
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow!....qwho is it!? whos sasuke looking for!? i really cant even guess. does anyone else have any idea who it might be?
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please make it mpreg it will only make this story cuter
person Chaos Raider Tenshi
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay Yondaime's still alive in this one!!!!, anyway please update as soon as possiable. this fic is really good so far, I can't wait to read more.
person Bookworm51485
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like so far.

I love your Naruto, he's cute.

For the vote, I say a yes to mpreg. GO MPREG!!

And lastly, I can't wait for your next update, I hope it comes soon.
person _jamie_
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha i like this story its funny!do more please!if you do i PROMISE to review!*and thats something i hate doing*PLEASE!
_jamie_
person Passing Reader
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful work! I love the plot to this, if you do decide to add m-preg to this, I do think it would make the plot more interesting, but some peole are against it, so you might put it in a sequel? Eighther way, love your story! :D
person Shadow2007
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! :D *standing ovation* Awesome! Please update soon I cant wait until the next chappy!