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OMG No you didnt. Lol that was a........a.........a Brilliant, no fantastic story. God yes I'm so in love with this story. I'll admit at 1st I didnt like the way the story had started. To me It didn't seem like sasuke liked naruto at all. And, to me, It seemed that naruto was way to annoying to be liked. I had hoped that sasuke would fall in love at first sight, well as naruto was more mature, sweet, cute. Know what I mean. Then the marriage would be anounced, and naruto refused well as sasuke refused to give up. Anyway what I was trying to say is even though I was not to fond of the begining, your story was still a big hit to me. And not only do I give it a five star rating.....But you now have a new fan for this story. Becaues I'm addictied.Lol Yes I'm addictied to this story "The Bad Boy and The Baby!!!!!" Yay God I cant wait for you to update. So please update soon. ok UPDATE SOON.......PLEASE......PRITTY PLEASE. Well see you soon.........Please be it sooner rather then latter.
Kisses ^_~

yesyes mpreg the more the better heheh "crazydance" i shall return for more

Very good start and I like MPreg but it depends on how it's written. But can't wait to read the next one. ^.^

WOW! I LUV this fic, Please up-date soon.

cool....and that pretty much sums it up.

Ooooo, Sasuke is so evil. But in a good way. <3 >=D

not an mpreg? oh man! how come? it'll be more interesting with mpreg ~_^
this story kinda funny too
neway, kinda confuse with something. what's 'gi and mustard hakama'? do tell ^^
oh yeah, you must continue!!

oh mpreg all the way! that would make sasuke even more possossive of naruto..and then the other gang could use it against sasuke

To be perfectly honest I liked the first chapter. You could bring in a lot of different situations into this fic without it seeming forced or unnatural. Whether knowingly or not, you’ve created characters and put them into a situation that allows you to virtually take this fic wherever your creative brain wants.
However, the only problem I do have with the first chapter is Sasuke. You’ve made him very rebellious and it seems odd that he would agree to anything without a fight, even a marriage to someone he was attracted to. I’m assuming that Sasuke wants this marriage for “other” reasons, at least at first, because that is more believable to me then him just deciding to marry someone because someone told him too. The only other thing is that I would advise you to get a beta reader because in your creative frenzy, there were a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes that could be easily and quickly avoided. If you would like, I offer my services as a beta. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


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Fan-fricking-tastic, great first chapter. I love it, it has great potentail, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it's really soon. Take care.