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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Good story, great plot line, but the writting, spelling, and grammar are a little bad. How about a 7 out of 10? I suggest getting a beta. If you need one, you can e-mail me at fireprincess59@yahoo.com, I'm efficient, and I look at detail very closely.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke you son of bitch!!!!!!!!! "I want to honor the engagement" my ass!!!!!!!! (Or Naruto's? ^///^)
So far, pretty good. Update soon!
So far, pretty good. Update soon!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that i'm not really into the whole mpreg thing, but then again, i've only tried it a few times... and was disappointed. but either way, if he pops out a kid from god knows where or doesn't, i'll still stick with this story. i like it and if you need any help then i'll gladly give what i can.
aye, now i have to go write a damn paper for school. stupid papers.
hope u update soon,
Inc
aye, now i have to go write a damn paper for school. stupid papers.
hope u update soon,
Inc
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far :), and yes, mpreg please. I love those kinds of SasuNaru stories XD!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEASE U HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!! HAHAHAHAHA That was awesome!!!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Good start! I really wanna see what happens next : D
But please,please,pleas DON'T add Mpreg. I promise many many reviews if you don't add Mpreg!!! >.<
But please,please,pleas DON'T add Mpreg. I promise many many reviews if you don't add Mpreg!!! >.<
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful :)
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good! Poor Naruto just has to come to terms with his uke-ness. More please
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i LUV this story!! plz leat naruto hav little uzumaki-uchiha uber-sexy babies!! with their own little fan clubs! ^^ thnx a bunch!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome!!And yes it should be a M-Preg fic!So....be sure to update soon!