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for The Bad Boy and the Baby

by Midnightstorm

schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww..*offers comforting hug* I thought that the new chapter was excellent. I think this entire fic is excellent! You are an amazing writer and i hope that you feel better soon ^_^
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job Taka-chan! I love the ending! its like sasuke doesn't even care about naruto. so he needs a good shock to his stsyem! yay taka-chan!
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sry, about your boyfriend, but honestly you deserve better. You don't want to be with a guy who doesn't respect your feelings and degrades you. Thats totally wrong. Don't worry. I'm sure you'll find a man that will make you very happy and you'll be super compatible, so don't lose hope. I love this chapter, btw. I can't wait to see what Sasuke does.
person mls
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!
person pooh
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...a review! it's been ages since i last wrote one!
anyway, about uchitake:

i sooo do like him! normally i'd agree with you saying OC’s are annoying, but i really want sasuke to become jealous and so on.
wouldn't even mind, if in the end he's the one heartbroken. just nothing too sappy.

and somethin’ else. you recently asked, which stories you should continue.
my favourites are “The Guardian“ and this story here.

pretty please keep on writing them <3
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, this whole time I've been falling for Takeshi but now after this chapter I love him even more! *laughs* I find myself hoping Sasuke will die and Takeshi can have Naruto XD

Another great chapter! I look forward to more!!
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no hiatus no hiatus NO HIATUS! u cannot and will not abandon this fic its getting too good to leave be. i hav to find out wat happens, will naru leave sasuke, will arashi kick sasu's ass, will takeshi finally get the uchiha and wats up wit mirai i hav to find out! so u cant abandon ok. if u need help email me and i will gladly giv my assistance ^_^
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I mean, if I could, I usually veer away from Mpreg fics... But alas, some authors are just too damn good with their craft that I end up reading their work anyway.

And you are one of then. Coming from a nobody like me, that may not mean anything... But hey, just pretend that it's a bribe for you to update 5 more chapters in one day.

Yeeeep. I am an inconsiderate bitch. Lolz. Just kidding. I just love this story. You've somehow managed to keep it as Naruto-ish as possible even with your two cents worth added in it. Quiet frankly, I can do away with all the Itachi-hatin't and the way you portrayed him here is awesome. It's just nice to read how you are able to weave the anime/manga facts with your own creative ideas to form one cohesive story.

Wow. That was long. Now, if only I could remember everything I just said so I can spread the love to all writers... That are as good as you.

And yes, that was another, umm, bribe.:3 Btw, the Mirai-character you are talking about, would she happen to be Haku. I know that Haku's a boy... Bah.. Whatever. Anyway, he is still my guess.

Happy writing!

Rage Niikura~~ (email: x_taleen_methane @ yahoo. Com - minus the spaces of course XP)
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy Holidays!! Thanks for the new chapter!! Glad to see that Naruto found evidence of Sasuke's betrayal. I sure hope that Sasuke doesn't find an excuse for it and Naruto believes him. Sasuke deserves punishment for his selfishness!!!
person Gwyllion
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg WaaaaaHHH!!! Thank you so much for continuing this fic! I love it so very much. Naruto is so adorable here that I just want to kidnap him and snuggle him to death. I can't believe Sasuke will betray our cute Naru-chan! *gasps* Well...hope everything all will go well for him. He'll be so devastated when he finds out. Sasuke will def have to be punished! D:<

Sorry to hear about your busy life schedule too. *hugs* Hope you will get a good long break and continue what you love to do. I absolutely love this story to bits and will wait patiently for more in the future. :)