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for The Bad Boy and the Baby

by Midnightstorm

person dut
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. pregnant already.. ha ha what is Arashi gonna say bout that? Update soon~
person dut
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow..Lost his virginity and pregnant already.. ha ha what is Arashi gonna say bout that? Update soon~
person TheGingerLady
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm very Very glad my blood presure is somewhat normal. otherewise I would soo have had a nosebleed! Hot! And oohhh os Sasuke in truble now! *snikers* but at the same time naaaww cute.. but hey there getting married enyway it shuld not be a problem realy.. ^^ soo look forwar to the next chap!
person animehead
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far. Some folks can be review stingy, and not want to leave any..lol. But I think you should keep going. I hope to read more from you soon.
person TheDeviant (too lazy to login)
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cruel ending.... lol, yet a very good story! You wrote a fantastic lemon by the way, so props to you for that.

Update soon!
Much Love,
TheDeviant
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah, I truly hate when authors craves reviews... but oh well... it's not like I want you to drop this, so UPDATE!!!
person AnA La PaNa83
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was awaiting an update on this man! Wow, so Sasuke and Naruto finally got it on, and faster than i actually thought they woulld too. Goody! I liked it. Anyway, good job. How can you not update quickly after THAT ciffhanger!!!
person SharinganEyes
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot Man Babies!! hehe...though this is the first time of heard of naruto being in pain while having man babies! It's cool kinda... another side to the story. Dude Sasuke'd gonna get his ass kicked lolupdate soon kay kay?!
person mE
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God you're killing me!! You can't leave a cliffhanger like that!! bakabakabakabaka!! :DD And that Lemon scene,.. probably the best I've read in a while. Keep up the good work and update. I want to know how Naruto and Sasuke react to these new developments!
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy for Naruto and Sasuke!! I hope its a boy or better yet, twins!! I wonder how Sasuke will take the news? Hurry with the next chapter!!