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for The Bad Boy and the Baby

by Midnightstorm

person Nomme de Plume
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now why in the world would they be mad that naruto is pregnant? that's what they wanted right? so what if it happened a week or two before the actual wedding? but this was such a good chapter, and i so want more!! but i also can't help but feel that that mirai girl is bad news somehow. and who was the white haired guy from the beginning? should i know the answer to that? anyway, update soon!!
person a person best left anonymous
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you live in india? whare? i was born in orissa. my entire family has had arranged marriages. my great grandmother was married when she was NINE and her husband died when she was ELEVEN. my parents have an aranged marriage too... not going so great... but indians won't divorce... hopefully i won't have an arranged marriage... i don't want to get married... what if my fiance' doesn't approve of my sasunaru obsession... well, screw them... i heart sasunaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ... sorry about that... love your story...
person mE
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God!!! This is so good...I'm biting my nails here, thank u very much! I've been waiting a good fic with actualy interesting plot. Please update soon. I'm dying for the good fics such as yours!! seeya thanks! <3
person seraphym
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the new kind of world you have set up for this story. I would love if this continued past their marriage, because I would love to see Sasuke's problems finally clear up and for him to fall in love with Naruto! Keep up the good work, I can't wait for updates!
person mE
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah.. I can't wait for the wedding! And the wedding night.. In some cultures the sheets are checked after the wedding night..for blood.. just wondering if their sheets gonna get checked..for bodily fluids or something ;D Or blood.. because Naruto is inexperienced with everything and I don't know how experienced Sasuke is, but it's quite possible that with Sasukes changing moods, he might hurt Naruto..even if he didn't mean to..but..still..can't wait!! Write faster ;D See ya :)
person niguara_chic
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i love it. keep updating. oh and i would like to vote for mpreg.please & thank you
person Snow Ahriman
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I love how you have them starting to fall in love. I hope you can work really fast and don't let Itachi push you around, you're the writer...make him your play toy.
person XZanayu
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can sasuke and Naruto learn to love each other? Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
person dut
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is starting to have feelingS! MOre more!
person Amber
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I lvoe your story. ^_^