rate_review Reviews

I'm disappointed. I like Naruto with Gaara and I was excited to see someone FINALLY end a SasuNaruGaa triangle as GaaNaru. *sigh* oh well. This with an interesting new installment. I have to say I wish it hadn't been in the first person POV. I really hate that POV because I find it almost impossible to find an author who can write it well enough to not leave me utterly confused. That was a problem I did have, there were points where I was completely sure what was going on in the story. But all in all, I think it was okay.

Even though I felt bad for Sasuke I kind of didn't want him to have a happy ending because sometimes sad endings just make a story so much more relatable. It was good, but you should work on your grammar and spelling or get a beta because some of the errors ruined the serious mood.

I hope to see more from you, soon.

That was a nice follow up to your first chapter.

good work