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for Breaking the Habit

by DeityOfDeath

schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... really nice and intriguing start and development, I was pleasantly surprised at first but unfortunately the latest chapters kind of washed me down with cold water... it is really sort of disappointing when a nice fic starts to take a too sappy turn and please don't take this personally but the sappiness with Sasuke was a huge turn off and not really in the spirit of the beginning chapters. Too sudden, too sappy, too happy, too much Sasuke... that cannot even be blamed on the hormon-induced mood swings during pregnancy. I will probably still keep a tab on this fic but it's a shame to see a promising Ita/Naru morphing into Sasu/Naru... thou the idea and the writing style is nice and elegant.
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm rooting for Sasuke here. Itachi just doesn't seem to know the words love, compassion, or gentleness. Glad to see you're updating again!
person mls
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person nm1716
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON.
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY that was great so far - i just read all seven chapters in almost one sitting (damn phone)
I loved when sasuke asked why naruto did not tell him, and the explaination Naruto gives him ... like really, how do you tell someone something like that
Great fic so far ^__^
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ya know? i love this story. but everytime i read this one chapter where naruto and tsunade are talking bout what happened, i keep wondering....did his throat heal?
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^
person leanne
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far so good, I think it's pretty good story, (I don't like the future implications that Naruto might wind up with several other people, other than Sasuke. But it's your story) It's intense and I like the speed of it and I'd love to read more, so please update soon.
person Rosebud
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I'm so glad that Naruto and Sasuke kissed and that their going to try and work things out! ^^
I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope that you can update soon! ^^
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just love this fic. i eagerly look foward to your next update.