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for The 'Come Home With Me' Companion

by MsKeller

schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your ficlets. Very amusing indeed. *wink*
person moonmoore
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For a moment there I thought that the one dancing was Sasuke. as I read I kept picturing the dance moves and I just couldnt believe it. Even when I got sidetracked with the green sock I really thought it was Sasuke. I never even think of Lee. If I feel this tramatauzed, how can Sasuke be taking this? The horrors of anime. They come up with great characters but also some horrible ones. Lee needs a remake of his eyes. That is what really bugs me. I could do with the eyebrows but the eyes just take or make the package... weird? For the lack of a better term or a less polite one. Anyway, still waiting foe the sequel of "Come Home with Me".
person dana
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved come home with me so much i have reread it at least 3 times. the comp. fic had slipped by and i am totally upset with myself because i should have been read this blazin story. i like how you are showing parts of their daily life and how they are interacting together. i thought the story about the hat was so cute. i only have two questions. why did naruto refer to sasuke as his boyfriend while sasuke calls naruto his wife. how many chapters is this story gonning to be and when will you be putting up the sequel. can't wait for your next update.
person Allys
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!!!! ZOMG That was hilarious XD. At first I thought it was Sasuke and I was confused, I mean, Naruto way befoer Sasuke, but then LMAO!!! That was just Perfect XD. It's such a Lee song XD, but I have to disagree with Sasuke, believe it or not. :blushes furiously: but I would love that boy with that body dancing around in his underwear, LOL. I wouldn't know whether to laugh or jump him and probably end up doing both XD. I Loved this - Thank you so much :Strikes the Nice Guy Pose!!XD:
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey hey, little lady!! this was hilarious. at first i thought it was naruto. and then i thought it was sasuke. never would i have thought it was lee! ahahahaha! now i'm kinda looking forward to the sequel of 'come home with me.' and why do i not have a suggestion for this?!!! kinda looks bad for my own fics, ne? ahahaha.
person littleolmee
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, I had almost forgotten about your story 'Come Home With Me'; really loved that story. These one-shot are so funny. This last one was just great, I knew it had to be Lee; just something about it spoke of him and not just the green boxers either. I can just see Sasuke's tramutized face watching Lee dance; probably just like a train wreck . . . no matter how much you don't want to watch you can't help it. Love your writing, thanks for the newest one-shot drabble, hope to see more from you in the future. Take care.
person lo
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute. I like what you have developed here. It makes me grin and it is really sweet.
person chineseartist
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i laughed at that proposal. that was SO sasuke! so thanks for that. this is a cute story and i would appreciate it if you added more chapters! thanks in advance!
person Yuri-san
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will that "story for another day" have smut by any chance? *leer* XD; lol

YEAH! This one's SO my favorite. lml^_^lml
... >>;;;
person Nyuchan
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I love companion-fics/drabbles!

and i really love your talent to remain in character no matter what situation *giggles at the 3rd story* ^.^