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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To end it there with some loose threads...Will the snake be back or what's inside Naruto??? Please type more soon.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you can't end it just like that >_<, tasty lemon though! YES, you have to write a sequel, Orochimaru and his cult are still out there. I'm dying to know what they're gonna do to Naruto. So many unanswered questions, yes a sequel is the most appropriate thing RIGHT NOW, pretty please with sugar on top XD!!!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Scary scary scary. NO seriously, when i was a kid i was haunted by spirits exactly how you described them, dark shadows, they sucked all warmth and reason out of me, and in Lullaby Part 1 Orochi-san and Kabuto-san were expecting something in spirit form, that's what my haunts did too.. so never the less, it freaked me out. Your a great cult writer, you should publish for real!! Slight ooc-ness but not noticable. I can't wait till the next chappie!!! Happie Halloween!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh the plot thickens.
Creepy Orochimaru and is that Kabuto by any chance?
Kakashi as the creepy neighbour is really the leader of a special force
to protect Naruto and people like him.?
Very good! Keeps me on the edge of my seat.
Can't wait to see what he wants Naruto for.
Creepy Orochimaru and is that Kabuto by any chance?
Kakashi as the creepy neighbour is really the leader of a special force
to protect Naruto and people like him.?
Very good! Keeps me on the edge of my seat.
Can't wait to see what he wants Naruto for.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grah, Now I feel stupid. You did give Uzumaki credit. Not much, but it's better then nothing. You should give her better credit then "thanks for the idea."
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo!!! This is getting REALLY interesting!! But Naruto must remain calm-he's straight! STRAIGHT! lol, work that "playing-hard-to-get" magic and it's all good!
I'm wondering, does Kakashi think that the whole spiral thing is somehow related to Naruto...coz you know, that's his sign, aint it?
And Orochimaru is obviously after him since he apparently goes for "cute guys"!! lmao!
I would very much like to read more of this story so please update...SOON!!!
I'm wondering, does Kakashi think that the whole spiral thing is somehow related to Naruto...coz you know, that's his sign, aint it?
And Orochimaru is obviously after him since he apparently goes for "cute guys"!! lmao!
I would very much like to read more of this story so please update...SOON!!!
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stalking madness! Now Sasuke isn't in denial anymore, cool! I hope for your next update soon ^^
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is really good!
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaccckkk I LOVE this, have to have more, I l LOVE spooky stuff, specially around Halloween but in general love horror and thrillers and I soo want to see whats gonna happen, will Naruto be proven NOT paranoid?? will the killer go after him?? is there a ghost or something in thier house?? and the nieghbor, its Kakashi isn't it??? and he KNOWS something, or he can SEE things too huh huh??? ok ok I will stop but cant WAIT for more, ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha this is really good! After I read a chapter i felt like some one was watching me.
And then I heard noises up stairs... XD haha I'm stupid!
Great Job!
And then I heard noises up stairs... XD haha I'm stupid!
Great Job!