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I really like this story, and hope to see an update soon. I love it actually :)
Your very talented. As I am new to adultfanfiction.net I am unsure of how updates are received. So if you wouldn't mind emailing me when your story has been updated, that would be greatly appreciated.

no up..date...years . going to die.. update ....soon... or sriveling and dieing will occur...

There I read the lable on my lag wait say WHAT.... Update soon please or I'll diiiiie:)

SIH

This is a very good story. I find the plot very unique and enthralling. I read this awhile ago and recently had an urge to see if you updated it. I found the story again and read it all over again. I'm not sure if the last chapter you have up was read by me before or not but I do know that it was good. I draws me into the story even more and I can't wait until you update again. ^_^ Please tell me you have not abandoned this great fic. U.U

The plot inspires me so much! whenever I read it I want to know how it goes on but it's been so long and still no update. *sigh* What about the new chapter? I hope you decide to continue it...and I'm not giving up on this fic -I can't!- because it's one of the most worthy fics I've ever seen written on team7.

*ahem* (strikes good guy pose)

I REMAIN BLINDLY OPTIMISTIC THAT YOU WILL BE INSPIRED TO FINISH THIS STORY SOMEDAY!! YOU'RE AMAZING WRITING SKILLS ARE FULL OF YOUTHLY VIGOR AND PERCEPTION. OH THE JOYS OF READING YOUR FANFICTION!!

...er, yeah. I just wanted to let you know that I am still faithfully waiting for an update. I hope life is well. Cheers and happy writing.

^O^ Your fic is great!!! And there is something I really need to discuss with you about this fic! Please, please, can you contact me? (marina_dimi@yahoo.it) I'll be waiting till you show up. It's something important. Did I say your fic is awesome??*__*

awwww this fic is so awesome!!!^___^ i like the idea of having sasuke in control of those two, but at the same time he does all this only to fulfill his need for them, and is sometimes vulnerable /maybe he feels more than just an obsession...>.> like when he showed a hint of jealousy/. I wonder what is going to happen next..how will they react after this, and if Sasuke will really keep on being so strict and apparently-detached from them as he stated. You made them so IC! Will Naruto forgive him for that, how will Sakura and him deal with the situation -they are supposed to be still trying to bring him home- and what Sasuke is planning to do ohohoh XD so many things...^^ i just can't stop wondering! The beginning was wonderful[did I mention nice description and clear dialogues?], but now comes the difficult part, i really hope you continue it. I would have no clue as to how to proceed if I were you.
looking forward to next chappy ^o^

^-^ i love the idea of this story and i can't wait to see what happens!
...the morning after the night before would not be fun to write me thinks.
good luck and up-date soon!

I'm...really not sure how many times I've reread this chapter. I really really like it, and the things I didn't quite get the first time cleared up with the second rereading. I can't get this fic out of my head! And how creepy is it that the manga has taken a similar turn as your story, at least in what happens to Orochimaru? Love it! Actually I just got access to the manga within the last two weeks, and I must say, it's made me even MORE impressed with your IC characterizations than I was before. Right now, though, I feel the need to whine and say that Sakura isn't getting her fair screen time! Er, page time. Anywho, not that I don't love (drools, killed ded by) the SasukeNaruto interaction, I really want to see Sakura in there too! Mm. Breakfast the next day would probably be very hard to write. Maybe a first training session where Sasuke learns how very much he underestimated Sakura XD!! I can just see it! "Sasuke narrowly dodged the fist that exploded the wall a foot away from his temple. What had Sakura been doing??" lol.

Anywho, I am still a faithful fan, and I am faithfully waiting for the next installment.

Sincerely

mydarkerside

Oh how I love this story I hoe you update soon!