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for Binding Loose Ends

by Cerion

schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Kakashi is already figuring things out, just a bit. How long until members of Konoha figure out that Sasuke's in control? Since there aren't any clues to finding where Sakura and Naruto have been taken, will Kakashi-tachi return to Konoha? How will Tsunade react? Will Shikamaru be able to put any more clues together? Will anyone begin to suspect the nature of the seals on Naruto and Sakura? And you may not be interested in including a tidbit like this yourself, but Sakura still has parents back in Konoha. Would they have to be told, "Sorry, but your daughter may be the slave of a Very Evil Man now."

Naruto may be hurt and confused and mad, but I got the feeling in the bathroom scene that he hasn't lost his hope for Sasuke yet. Still, Sasuke can't let go of the idea of brutality being necessary.

Thank you for the humor. It may amuse you that I didn't catch on that it was a dream until the sword turned into ramen.
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay an update an this fic actually has a plot....are they gonna save sasuke-kun....please update soon please...keep up the good work
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Amazing! I've been waiting so long for this chapter, and you delivered spectacularly! Can't wait for the next one!!!
person Zannie
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo! Awesome! Evil Sasuke. Can't wait to see the next chappie.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome update! I love it, hope to see more soon! Great job as always
person mydarkerside
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAGGHHHH!! That's such a tease! You're almost worse than Shippuden!! *growl*

Seriously you freaked me out. I was just about to shut the old computer down for the night when I thought, "it won't hurt to do my daily check for an update of Binding Loose Ends"...then I snorted derisively and thought "If that story is updated, I just might piss myself"...seeing as my roommate is here, and screaming at this time of night would be bad, I settled for thumping my head on my desk while flapping my hands. I'm ridiculously ecstatic about this update. The short warning made my heart drop (even if I did sigh and secretly appreciate it). I hope that the next chapter is longer and that we get to see more Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura interaction. I also appreciate what you're doing with Sai. I usually only see him portrayed completely and unredeemablely annoying and pesky.

The dream was a bit confusing and so were some of the phrasings. I suspect it's nothing a rereading won't fix. XD XD XD

Thank you for this tidbit!!

Update again soon!!
person mydarkerside
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say this is at least the seventh time (if not more) I've read this fic. It's the best thing to hit Team 7 threesome fics in a good long while. And I love that it's a bit darker than usual. I've been wondering though. In chapter 3, you specifically say that Sasuke pulls two things out of the bedside table drawer. One of them was obviously the lube. What was the other?

I really hope that you're planning on finishing this story. I'll keep checking for updates (and reading and rereading this fic). This story seriously deserves a little more love.
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far, can't wait for an update!
person Shingo the Pest
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the first Sasuke x Sakura lemon I ever read. And I loved it! The way Sakura whimpered and whined was sexy as hell, and so was the way Sasuke got uncomfortable when she tried to pleasure him. I also reread the first lemon. My favorite part is still the "Idon'tlikeitIdon'tlikeit". That was perfectly Naruto. So funny, and exactly how he would really react. I hope you'll be writing a Sasuke x Naruto lemon with penetration.

I can't wait to see the complications of this situation. How will Konoha find out that Naruto and Sakura are sealed? How will their friends react? How will Kakashi, Tsunade, Jiraiya, and Ino react? Will Naruto and Sakura be forced to battle anyone from Konoha?

We all know what the relationship is between Sound and Leaf, but what is the relationship between Sound and the other hidden villages like Mist or Rock? How would Sasuke deal with political issues? What type of influence will Naruto and Sakura have on the way Sound is run? Could the ultimate destiny of Sound change because those two are there to give mercy and protection to the people?
person Jaganshi-Kyou
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, You've SERIOUSLY need to update as soon as possible. This is one of the most interesting Naru/Saku/Sasu plot I've read lately, and I'm going out of my mind praying for an update. I don't mean to sound like an impatient ass and hound you (...but I guess I am, huh?). I guess I'm just going through withdrawals. I'm crossing my fingers in hopes of you getting a little inspiration soon.
Good Luck, I'm looking forward to your Update

J~Kyou