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by Cerion

person marina
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!the fourth chapter!!^O^ Very nice,I just thought sakura would react more than just blushing when she understood that he had done the same to naruto XDD Oh and I liked the part of sasuke being jealous...hehe
i'm waiting the next with impatience..yay!
person LilyDraken
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! I was waiting all week for this and it was *so* good! Sasuke-kun's evil! But not necessarily... you've done a fabulous job with him, and I love how Orochimaru keeps attempting to throw in his two cents. Really good job with that. And I'm all over NaruSaku. Damn you Sasuke-kun! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
person SailorSun1
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I hope you update soon!
person morwen re
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! another update! i love you... yeah, now that i've just royally embarassed myself, great job on this chapter! everyone was in character and you didn't have any gramar or spelling mistakes that i caught... please update again soon! here's a cookie for your lastest chapter! ja ne!
person LilyDraken
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
person eve
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story mate! history repeating itself the only difference is that sasuke's smarter than orochimaru. i'd like to see more. i wonder how would sakura react. please update :)
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sigh i reread it... i want more!
person poornmiserable
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto...well this chapter explained who was who....thanx...so what now...is knoha gonna come after them what about kakashi and the rest of em....keep up the good work update soon
person marina
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first, reading it was your 1st fanfic, I just though to give it a look and not to expect mucç>_>...but once I got to the first paragraph I immediately noticed the nice descriptions and generally that it was a work not done in a rush..so i kept going, more interested. Well, by the time I reached the second chapter I was totally absorbed from the plot, and when I finished the third I was amazed *__*congrats!!i really liked it so far!I didn't expect sasuke to prevail on oro, least of all to take his comrades as prisoners and give them the seal!!XD By the way, i liked where naruto was beging for him not to do anything to sakura^//^I look forward to you updates!!!
person keket
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good start. The plot is something a bit different, so that is good. I look forward to more soon!