AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Binding Loose Ends

by Cerion

person teaspoon
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This was pretty good! It holds a lot of promise, and I'm sure the more you write the more fans you'll get. This is an interesting plot hmmm. I can't wait to read this story till the end!
person yuyaaa
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue this fic soon.
I like the storie ^__^
Kiss
person Shingo the Pest
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was an emotionally emotionally driven lemon. I felt the suppressed guilt in Sasuke, and the rising and falling hope in Naruto. My favorite parts were where Naruto went from scared to angry, and the awesome line “Aaaaaaah! Idon’tlikethisIdon’tlikethisIdon’tlikethis…”

May I say that finding a good SasuNaruSaku threesome is hard? So thank you very much.
person SailorSun1
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really interesting. I hope the next chapter comes out soon!
person poornmiserable
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so cool i want to see where you are going with this keep up the good work this is an awesome fic....one question the seals done to naruto and sakura where done to them while orochimaru was still in control of sasuke's mind in chapter one right so then is chapter 2 sasuke ended up winning over orochimaru and is now going to keep naruto and sakura....is that the deal
keep up the good work and update soon
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting story so far, I like it a lot. I'm curious to what you have planned in the end. Sasuke is a little devil, which makes the story fun. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Kat
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this is so good! Please update
person not telling
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS SASUKE??? HOW DARE HE THAT BASTARD! (i'm kidding sasuke is wonderful, but he's still evil sometimes) good job! i hope you update soon!