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for To make her mine

by Trollmia

person dragonlady sakura
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. The cute kid added was a nice touch. It makes Sasuke more likeable seeing him deal with children. You're absolutely turning me into a Sasuke/Hinata shipper even though I'm a HUGHLY Sasuke/Sakura and Hinata/Naruto fanatic!!
person oztan
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I hope you update.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you update this story. I really like the turn you have taken with it, I hope to see more in the future. In the mean time GREAT JOB! I love reading your stories
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Please dont give up on this story! I really like your writing style, and enjoy all of your stories. It's a shame you don't get more reviews.....
anyway! Great job, I'll be looking forward to an update soon. Keep up the great work!
person bait you in
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice.
person blisblop
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was very nice to see sasuke so happy this way.I never thought of this before.
person blue
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok that was so cute you got to update soon!^^
person Ratholin
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi I didnt mean to steal your story my friend sent it to me and told me to post it on my adultfanfiction page since she didt have one I should have known she copied it sence she is not a very good writer I thought she must of had a good day or something sorry for the inconvenience I promise to check next time and make sure it's not someone elses work
person Legilmyth
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like it! I can't wait to see where you take their teasing of eachother.
Keep up the great work!
person James
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww cute update please