rate_review Reviews

Wow, Im impressed. I love a good seme!Iruka and this was really well done. I hope there's more of this.

People seem to think seme Iruka is rare but I see it often enough, the difference with yours is that he is being rather forceful, I think that part is unusual. I have no problem with that it just means that maybe farther into the story you could have Kakashi return the favour, I can't see him letting Iruka have all the fun.
The idea that they just see each other and have sex and don't even know who the other is was a little surprising, it made me wonder if that was something they would actually do or not. But that concern was definitely put aside by the extremely hot sex, I can't what to see how you continue this and bring them together again.
One other thing don't worry about the reviews just keep writing what makes you happy, how many reviews you get isn't an indicator of how good or bad a story is. I'm sure you've seen really bad stories and yet they have tons or reviews, you're doing a great job don't worry about the rest ;)

So many hits and not many reviews, now I feel guilty. I likes it of course and it's nice to see you mixing it up with making Iruka top, but I am hopeful that he will be bottom too :D

Nice. Making Iruka the powerful one.....I like it.

are you serious??! this was so sexy!!!!! i loved the part with iruka's peirced nipples, i sooo think he has them!!!! and the last part, with the kiss on kakashi's back :D that was really tender.

but damn! your iruka sure is a commanding one XD but maybe kakashi likes it like that? anyways, this was SO hot! can't wait till you update, don't leave us hanging! :D