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by NeeruXoria

person Pyrite
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please write more Shukaku/Gaara. I love this pairing! You are a great artist!
person Beatrix
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have never seen a Shukakuxgaara fic before..
I bet shukaku made the dream right? Old perv he is..
I BEG you to do another pairing of them!
pretty pretty pleace!! *Glowing lime puppy eyes*
person Beatrix
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By the way..if you decide to do it.... send me a e-mail ^^ : One_bloody_wolf@hotmail.com
person emily
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh omg sweet! i love this pairing! there's not enough of it! rock on!
person Hemmelich
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its Evil...I LOVE IT!!!!
person GaaraSexyNoJutsu
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. You have Gaara's visade very well played.
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great, want more.
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Usually hate rape fics, but I somehow find myself reading anything with Gaara in it. I don't know why. I was surprised when I didn't hate the fic (really don't like rape)...in fact since it was Gaara and a non-person it wasn't bad at all...in fact, it was very inventive and interesting. Good job...I do like the fact that you didn't make it at all happy rape. I ABHOR happy rape, and when I explain that I mean someone who likes getting raped...you didn't glorify it and that I thank you for.

Good story, must go read more of your fics now.
person Just_me
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I never read a story where Gaara get's raped by his own sand. You've done well. Like Gaara I was wondering why the ANBU hadn't stepped in yet and laughed when I read it was a dream (about to turn reality, if Gaara does not get up and run as fast as he can).
I praise you on the fact that Gaara keeps disliking to get raped. In a lot of rape stories halfway through the rape (with whatever object) the person being raped starts to like it and beg for more and then even come back for more...which I don't see Gaara doing...XP
I like the fact you gave Shukaku a Germanish accent. I found one mistake, though. Shukaku is the one-tail. Not the two-tail (that is nekomata).
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is awsome! But poor Gaara. But still you like NEVER see a Shukaku/Gaara stroy! Please make more! Pretty pretty pretty pretty PLEASE! You are GOD!