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This was, like, REALLY good. Well, I am a complete sucker for awkward, misleading situations and secret yearnings. *sweatdrop* I think you made Neji's aloof and cool facade perfectly balanced with Naruto's loud and cheerful one. I'm usually not into Naruto/Neji but what can I say? You write too well. This is totally beautiful romance material.
Thank you for sharing your work. It was a pleasure reading it. My only regret is that it was so short of a story, but oh well. If there's going to be a sequel, there will be. If not, then too bad. We all know Inspiration's a bitch. :) Anyways, you've totally made my day. Good luck for the future.

Have a lovely day,
Cranberriebird

waaaa there should be a continuation... damn that was hot. Poor Neji...

I love love love this mini fic it sone of my all time favorites, nicely written, great plot idea, funny and angsty really capturing the Naruto/Neji relationship I always saw them having. It was so good I even printed it out to read whenever the need came up. SO thanks for the awsome fic I loved it and yeah I read it awhile abck years ago actually and don't know why I didn't leave a review then just lazy I guess. I hope oyu haven't stopped writing andkeep doing more Naruto/Neji's

You have to make a chapter two. I like to see what happens next.

Didn't really get the end of this chapter...but is that all or is this a story?? Please say it's a story-PLEASE!!!! There's not enough NaruNeji going on here and one rarely finds a really good story with this pair-up! you just HAVE to make it into a story and continue...update every two days (not really asking for much, especially if I'm going to reward you with reviews, a nice warm mug of vanilla milk and cookies!)

*holds up a plate of cookies and the mug of milk hopefully*

PLEEEEEEEEEEASE???

You should totally write another part to this story if it was meant to be a one shot! It's very different. Very good. I like it! <3 A lot! <3<3 I love the NejiNaru pairing but there are so few of them...;o;

Okay, so first, let me admit that I am horrible at leaving reviews. You'd think, as an author who enjoys recieving them, I'd be more keen to leave them. Alas, I'm not that deep. My shallowness aside, this was Amazing! Naruto/Neji is my all time favorite. And this fic was so perfectly in tune with them. I suppose, it wouldn't do much, begging for a sequel. But I am also shameless, so....PLEASE consider a joint piece! Maybe a series. I know how bothersome it cane be. They're a lot of work, time consuming, etc...However, when someone hits so well on a topic, they ought to consider expansion. And I believe you ought to consider expansion.

Five stars!

First off, this was EVIL.

Second, it was also excellent. I really enjoyed the little contrast between what Naruto was thinking, and what Neji thought was going on in his head. This isn't a pairing I usually read, but you made it work nicely, without even making it a pairing in itself. Neji's characterization felt spot-on. Great job!

That was EVIIIIIIILLLL!!! But awsome! ^o^

You should make it a two-shotter like someone previously said. I would just looooooove to see some Naruto and Neji action.....Naruto sooooooo tops Neji. *fan-girl scream*

so um, theres more right?