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for A Distant Cry

by yersifanel

person blisblop
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, redemption! A new take indeed.The research you have done makes this all very realistic.It has been gathering the feel of a fairy tale, in the best of ways meaning timeless.It's a great read.I hope you are still completing it.
person randomicicle
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I shall say, this was brilliant. I don't know why for a moment I thought it was complete though.

There's only on thing that keeps nagging me on and on. The Link function. I mean, is he killing/sedating the Bijuus or something? I really don't get that, but I'm sure that'll be explained later. As for now, I'm totally in love with Neji.

Keep up the good work! You writin style is very good and the story, as long as it was, keeps a good flow.
person Iteji lover
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good I hope you're going to continue with it. I love Neji and Itachi as a pair and throwing sasuke in just makes it better and they're so rare a couple but oyu're doing a good job with them so please write on!
person GhostInTheShellStandAlone
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I don't want to see Some SasukeNeji action. In fact, I hope thats not the pairing in the end. I enjoy the ItachiNeji. I LOVE it! C'mon! I'm an ItaNeji fan, not a SasuNeji! Yes...I am psycho like that^^
person Twiggies
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. I love this story so much.
It was great to see that Neji actually was on a mission for Akatsuki.
Poor Neji. He has suffered so much.
Oh and I loved the ending.. part. Eh, yeah. Some ItaNeji, yay! xD
Well I hope we'll be seeing Sasuke a little more in the next chapter.
Keep writing and update soon!
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! An update. I've been patiently waiting for it and here it is. Thanks!

Sorry I haven't reviewed up until this point but I'll just try to summarize what I have to say. I love anything with Sasuke x Neji in it and I love this story line since it's not an AU fic (Not that I don't like AU fics with Sasuke x Neji in them but I haven't found very many besides this one and the other one you mentioned, can't remember the name right now).

It was extremely sad when Itachi came back for Neji, my poor little Neji was so confused when Itachi kept insisting about the promise they had made and my heart wept when he had sex with Neji for the first time. Now he's gone from Sasuke but at least the Caged Bird Seal is gone too. I hate that thing. It marrs his intricate beauty.

So, Neji chose to go with Itachi and now he's a member in the Akatsuki huh? He's also going to be the 'Link'. Hmm, I really don't know where you're going to take this but it's filled with so many twists that you will just end up surprising me no matter what you choose to do with it. I'm getting anxious about the next chapter now, lol.

Well take your time and have fun with it. ^_^
person nayanroo
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehe...it's all so twisted and lovely. It's like a lopsided triangle. I love this kind of stuff--interesting idea too. I can't wait to read more!
person sandkanuro
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a very good yaoi pleaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing the story is really good and i hope neji and sasuke get back together^_______^
person llyoung
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I just read all the chapters of your story and that I am really enjoying it and looking forward to future updates. Your story is very interesting and has a great plot. Your reasons for Sasuke joining Orochimaru are better and make more sense then the "read" manga plot. Thanks for writing and sharing such a good story.
person Twiggies
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Once again you wrote an amazing chapter. Please write more, I think I'm in love with this fic. xDD
Heheh. Keep writing.