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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa, I really liked this!! the story flowed very well, and i agree with your AN in the beginning about not giving too much detail too quickly, because i definately want to read more.
I like that the characters are fairly IC which so few authors do these days, and that its funny, without being too OTT
good job! im gonna bookmark this fic in the hopes that you update soon!!!
XXX
I like that the characters are fairly IC which so few authors do these days, and that its funny, without being too OTT
good job! im gonna bookmark this fic in the hopes that you update soon!!!
XXX
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like this story so far. Layghed my ass off when it came to the Sasuke being engaged to Naruto part! Anyway I really enjoyed this first chapter and can't wait to read the next one, please update soon! I want to find out what happened to Naruto to make him go on a drinking binge and almost indulge in the act of public nudity,lol. ^_^
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome!!!
More...I want more of this!!!
More...I want more of this!!!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent so far. Can't wait to read the next installment. :D
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot about this. Glad you reposted it. Does this mean that you are going to add more to this? Will we ever find out why Naruto quit? And why in the H*ll is Sasuke with Sakura? That pair creeps me out. I hope there will be more soon.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. I am forever indebted to you for writing such a great fic. I want more! God, I was looking at the chapter at first and thought "How daunting, it's late and I don't want to read all that." After the first sentence, however, I couldn't stop and I think it might have taken me ten minutes to read... With pauses to laugh or re-read unbelievable things.
Maa, that whole engagement to Sasuke thing was a cruel joke. I stopped and re-read it like ten times to make sure my eyes weren't deceiving me and I was so thankful to the Yaoi gods and you that Sasuke was engaged to Naruto. Then, when I read it was a joke, I think I face-vaulted worse than and anti-yaoi Sakura seeing Sasuke and Naruto kiss. Oh, it was a terrible emotional rollercoaster. Still, it was funny so thank you for that.
Well, I hope you post more soon. I'm addicted to you writing.
Officially your fan,
Oraday^.^
Maa, that whole engagement to Sasuke thing was a cruel joke. I stopped and re-read it like ten times to make sure my eyes weren't deceiving me and I was so thankful to the Yaoi gods and you that Sasuke was engaged to Naruto. Then, when I read it was a joke, I think I face-vaulted worse than and anti-yaoi Sakura seeing Sasuke and Naruto kiss. Oh, it was a terrible emotional rollercoaster. Still, it was funny so thank you for that.
Well, I hope you post more soon. I'm addicted to you writing.
Officially your fan,
Oraday^.^
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYYY!! LOVEEEE!! *cries* Oh it's so funny... and Naruto is so cuteeeee XD!!!
*hides* Yes, I've reviewed before! Yosh! Please update this hilarious fic! Please! Please, please, please, pleaseee! *begs*
Whoops... is this nagging a form of harassment? XP.
*hides* Yes, I've reviewed before! Yosh! Please update this hilarious fic! Please! Please, please, please, pleaseee! *begs*
Whoops... is this nagging a form of harassment? XP.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. O.o
I have to know what's going on NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!!! XD My face was probably a mirror-image of Sasuke's when Naruto made his little "joke"(except I was laughing XD). (Was that even a joke! GAAH! I need to know!! DX)
I demand you continue! *shoots you in the ass with a lightning bolt* ...please. *cough...*
I have to know what's going on NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!!! XD My face was probably a mirror-image of Sasuke's when Naruto made his little "joke"(except I was laughing XD). (Was that even a joke! GAAH! I need to know!! DX)
I demand you continue! *shoots you in the ass with a lightning bolt* ...please. *cough...*
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't review stories after reading only one chapter, but man that was funny! Bastartender?! Oh man. Anyway, you write well and I actually like it when authors use normal speech/slang for the dialogue bits. So please, keep writing! And thanks!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!) Loved the part where Naruto said he was engaged(sp?) to Sasuke. The look on Sasuke face would of been a good one. Looking forward to the next chapter.