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for Won't Let You Go

by Reyn

person someone you don't know
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(totally jealous of all the people hitting on the author) She's minnneee~eeee! XXXD jk

You need to get another chapter written, hon. Seriously, this is very good! And everyone loves it and wants to be your friend! You're a super star! Yay! Write more so I can see it before everyone else! Buwhaha! (frolicks off)


-someone you still don't know
person xpyne
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heeeeeey, i really like it! your writting style flows well and i was interested the whole time! <3 although i'm offended by your arrogance in proclaiming you spell words wrong on *purpose* (i mean, wtf?? you think you're better than webster or something?), i guess there's like, reeeeaaaally rare occasions where a spelling can be modified for the better. like spikey vs. spiky. i mean, "spiky" is the correct spelling but doesn't it look like spick-ee? whatever. don't spell stuff wrong on purpose, geez. anyway--like i said, i like your story a lot. i was totally as annoyed as sasuke when a nice long chapter managed to end without even explaining why naruto quit, dAMN. hahaha, only good fics ellicit emotional responses, yo. and i sure don't bother reviewing lame stories.

so, i hope you're the type to update often. i'll check every week for you, mmkay? and i know you're most likely writting this for your own enjoyment, not mine, but if you please me i will make you a fanart present (i'm an art major, so dont expect anything crappy, neither ^__~ ). ahaha, i apologize, this review is kinda rude, isn't it? it's because tone doesn't carry well over type...i didn't mean it to be. ah, well, we should be buddies. gambatte, reyn-san! i can't wait to read more! <3
person xpyne
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wth? i left a paragraph long review and it only posted the first line...-__-;;;;
person sadistickiss
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! T_T They are so so so so so cute! XP! This story is hilarious -- I'm going to die XD. It's so well written, and funny, and interesting, and dramatic, and adorable and kyaaaaa XD! I love it I love it I love it. Update onegaishimasu XD!
person Stagoya
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I completely love this story!! It's so interesting, and I have no clue whatsoever what's going to happen next. I love that you can keep me clueless, normally it's pretty easy for me to see what's going to happen. And you write so well, I love it. Can't wait until the next chaptre comes out. Hey, think you can e-mail me when it does so I know? That would be really cool. ^_^ Anyway, keep up the great writing!
person OHMYGOSH D.J.
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I love this so far :-D! And drunk Naruto is so funny, and Sasuke trying to keep Naruto's shirt on him. Please I want to read MORE, please update as soon as possible pretty please with sugar on top ^-^!
person Stacy
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! LOVE IT!! I just laughed and laughed...your so funny I can't wait to read your lemons!!
person Arcane
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome story so far! Much kudos to you on writing such an original and well-written story!! :D It's been a LONG time since I've read something so good, and I seriously hope you continue to update this fic... btw, do you have a LJ account? :D I want to friend you, if so :D :D Keep up the great work, hun, and I hope to hear more from you soon---such great stories should continue and get uber amounts of reviews for their awesomeness :)

-Arcane
person Nomme de Plume
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
geez, i love this concept, even though it's not very far in! i want to know what naruto's secret is, or at least have it expounded upon if it really is that he's engaged. oh, and even though i read your A/N, it's supposed to be Tsunade and not Tsunde (unless you're not talking about the Godaime, and if you're not, i'm sorry for assuming you are). great beginning! update soon!
person SharinganEyes
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah wonderful! That...oh that was priceless I was cracking up when Naruto said... "To You." Hahah Sasuke damn there shit in his pants! -huggles- Oh please update I'm really into this and I wanna see what happens... I wanna know why Naruto really left.